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10-04-04, 07:40 AM
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"Do We Care"....Leave Feedback.....
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The Tears...The Cries....The Bloodshed... Wut does this lead to?...does it get us anywhere? Should we care about the ones that are left dead? We are unaware that many people die in despare But do we care? Do we care that young teens of 18 are let out to fight But for what?.....they have the risk of only living a short life They cant even have a future...Knowing they can die tonight Wut if something happens and all they're left is with a survival knife Do we Care? Many men and women are just here for warfare Are they crazy or is it just there american dream? Its not like they're gettin money and becoming a millionaire Maybe its their self-esteem to be apart of the supreme team But again.....Do we really care? With bullets flying everywhere...Oh, I see as long as we're not there As long as we're safe and not in harms way But who cares....Just as long as we believe in gods prayer But its okay...We see the t.v. display with soldiers dying everyday Yes...We don't care... Why does one fight?... When all you are is the governments puppets They dont give a damn who you are, But just as long as they win the war People die in the battlefield, But who cares? Might as well call them the Muppets You may fight hardcore, But remember when you die people dont give a fuck about you any more Thats the truth!!....They dont care!!... __________________________________________________ ____ Aight this Poem is basically about how people in America dont give a fuck about anything espescially in time of war....Drop some Feedback.....and leave a link if u need feedback.... Last edited by ECKO : 10-04-04 at 08:24 AM. |
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10-04-04, 07:58 AM
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yo, that was hot.. hot and true.... now return the favor:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152467 thanx n good luck. peace!
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10-04-04, 08:28 AM
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thanks.........eyvon...
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10-04-04, 05:40 PM
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I have a lot to learn...
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^that was some good shit.. ya gettin better at this poetry thing. This one was more.. errmm... poem-like? somehow.. maybe the structure or rhyme schemes.. but yeah.. i was feelin the content.. true shit.. lotsa emotion in there..
overall a good drop.
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10-04-04, 07:03 PM
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tahnks omb .....upping for feedback
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10-04-04, 09:30 PM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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my little pimp in training is making me proud
*blows his nose*
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10-04-04, 09:36 PM
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lol.....uppin for more feed back
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10-04-04, 09:49 PM
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damn man that shit was good yo........nice drop.....and shit that is tru........if i had to rate it it be a 9/10........keep doin ya thing......
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10-04-04, 11:41 PM
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upping for feed back....o thanks kru
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