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Ambient 10-04-04 02:12 PM

Assasin vs Verbal Phenom
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Just Check In Quick..........

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-07-04 at 02:12 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 10-04-04 02:14 PM

Assasin has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 02:14 PM.

System 10-04-04 02:14 PM

Verbal Phenom has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 02:14 PM.

Immense 10-04-04 02:14 PM

are ya usin the time limit kid...or will u be droppin 2day.....

Ambient 10-04-04 03:10 PM

Kid Ya Can't Battle With The King of Verbs, Losing Isn't An Option
Alias Demonstrates Ya Lyrics Must Suck Being Named Afta A Condom*
Battle Is Only One Round Like Writers Block Yall Never Make Round 2**
Respect Is Out Of The Question... Asking Newbs To Join Ya Crew?!?
Your Future Is Dim And Hard To See Like A Dark Room With No Lighting
Change Ya Name To Parrana Coz Every "Line" He Sees He Sure To B Biting
This Dogs About To Be "Put Down" Coz everytime You Drop We Consider It "Foul"
U Winning Is Doubtful So Do What America Did To Saddam And Hand In The Towel


**He Has Entered Writers Block
*His Old Name Was Trojan

Immense 10-04-04 03:15 PM

ill leave ya lookin like a smurf..blue in the face..stuck for words while ya choke...
gettin ya ass smoked by me is the only way u'll know wot its like to be dope...
this fag aint sick,the only time he flowz heavy is when he bleeds...
he has to put dick in his mouth an swallow cum in order to 'succ seed'...
i leave ya paralized,crutches be the only bit of metal u be packin...
ya tht whack,ya come last place at the paralympics rappin...
verbal phenom spits rhymes more played thn lines from shakespeare scripts...
you could write ya whole verse in braille and we still wouldnt feel it...
its only right tht i acknowledge ya for tryin,we cant all have dope skillz when we write...
u could compress ya whack lines together and they still wouldnt be tight...

Immense 10-04-04 03:17 PM

aight...nice verse........but i havnt joined writers block...lol.......dunno were u got tht from...uppin this yall..............

Ambient 10-04-04 03:19 PM

Lol...... Got It Mixed Up With Coast Wars.......

Immense 10-04-04 03:23 PM

lol...its aight man.....now let get the votes in...........

Dirty Nigga 10-04-04 03:25 PM

Voted For: Verbal Phenom

aiiiiight
decent drop from verb, nice vocab, nice metas an the personals were right on point, decent drop verb..
u got my vote..

assasin, ya rhymes lacked creativity, an the structure was all messed up in some parts...

the shake spear scripts line was off the hook tho, but i think verb just edged this battle, sorry assasin...
no hate, just tellin it how i see it

return the fave in sig, peace

Immense 10-04-04 03:54 PM

pz man............uppin..

Yvonne 10-04-04 03:55 PM

Voted For: Verbal Phenom

phenom gets this....

his lines were well placed....his wordplay personals and punches were BANGIN fo real..his verse was flowing all thru...and his lines werent stretched...trojan..u mercked me and mayne what happ herre?...ya last lines were stretched..u had hard punches but they werent bangin like phantoms...o well verbal gets this for a better verse which was interessting all thru and which kept on flowin...props to both tho...

holla!!

Ambient 10-05-04 06:45 AM

uppin for votes...................

Ice Pick 10-05-04 10:15 AM

Voted For: Assasin

this fag aint sick,the only time he flowz heavy is when he bleeds...
he has to put dick in his mouth an swallow cum in order to 'succ seed'...
this was fuckin funny ass fuck

its only right tht i acknowledge ya for tryin,we cant all have dope skillz when we write...
u could compress ya whack lines together and they still wouldnt be tight...
that was ok


Verb Phenon. why you shrink down ya lines so they dont look stretched and shit, wack punches anf lame ass atempts at personals... OPTION AND CONDOM DONT RYHME

Battle Is Only One Round Like Writers Block Yall Never Make Round 2**
Respect Is Out Of The Question... Asking Newbs To Join Ya Crew?!?
only good line and it didnt even affect him

VOte assasin for better verse and better use of dissing and more funny to read.....



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Immense 10-05-04 01:03 PM

uppin this yall....honest votes returned..........


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