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In-Vision 10-08-04 02:40 AM

.:.::A:d:d:i:c:t:e:d::.:.
 
.:.My Love.:.

you were my teacher, showed me the meaning of inner beauty..
you Inspired me, you were the cause for my ingenuity..
You transformed my thoughts to accurately placed blots..
told me I could change lives with a song if i connected the dots..
I sacraficed my life for you, still livin but would make the same difference dead..
try to run from suicide, than i hear the devil laughin in my head..
It's like he knows whats comin, i am no longer a servant of jesus..
How could I be when love is a biblical trait, and yet he chose to deveive us..
deception is common, but i never thought you or the lord would plot against me..
I hate myself because you don't love me, watch me turn my wrists to mince meat..

.:.My Confusion.:.

did i do something wrong? or did you just have a change of heart..
The thought puts me in a tantrum, leavin blood stains and art
I had everything baby, a job, friends and undeniable wisdom..
you fucked up my perfect vision, now i view your lies through a prism..
How could we go from best friends to hatin eachother all in an instant..
My mom loved you too, i had your essence in my veins as an infant..
But now i see you for who you are, you were born devils advocate..
exposed my soul and my brain to you, and you sat there and blasted it..
Now i'm dying, slowly, but theres no question about it..
wait a minute, I'm young and invincible, i can find a way around it..

.:.My Understanding.:.

My life is getting shorter, my hearts broken in two and I'm cold..
i'm lost without you , when things were bad, it was you i would hold..
Thats over now, the law forbids us, even when i asked for repentance
oh well, I can feel death upon me as I put my last words into this sentence..
I should have listened to my friends when they told me you were a whore..
revenge is my new obsession, but theres no way i could ever settle the score..
I can't kill you, it's impossible, you don't own any life lines..
don't have a heart or a mind, but your the brain behind this generations crimes..
Now my brain is fried, and I'm gettin dizzy from the sight of blood on my clothes..
don't turn out like me, this is what happens when you let that bitch fuck in your nose..




if yall didn't get this...i'm sorry...

Key... 10-08-04 11:51 AM

Wow ...i always love yo drops man transitions were smooth am feelin it flow was there....imagery was there

In-Vision 10-08-04 01:53 PM

thanks man..uppin

villagepimp 10-08-04 01:59 PM

wow... I always love reading your shit man... your fucking awesome... if you ever put out a cd or demo... Imma get at that shit...

btw... that was awesome, I love the imagry and the way you told the story... fucking awesome.

In my books that's a classic... 9.8/10

In-Vision 10-08-04 02:33 PM

thanks dawg...i'm glad you liked it....thats what it's all about

Parallel 10-09-04 01:31 AM

man your fuckin dope with these topicals to be honest you should change your name to like topicals or something like that yer shits tight i neve runderstand yer punches in battles but its simple to see yer topicals n shit fuckin dope...no swearing thats poetry at its finest lol as i was reading yer drop i am makin a topical called love or soem shit but its gonna hit hard yer verse was kinda explaining the same shit...9.8/10 fuckin dope

In-Vision 10-09-04 02:59 PM

uppin this.....

J Summers 10-09-04 04:00 PM

tight shit cuz.... nice overall very deep and using good vocab and not affecting your flow to do that...

In-Vision 10-09-04 10:51 PM

thanks bro...up

In-Vision 10-10-04 04:19 PM

uppin for the people...

In-Vision 10-13-04 01:49 PM

up...up...and away

In-Vision 10-20-04 05:06 PM

yall should be peeeppin...instead yall zzzzzzzzziin

In-Vision 10-28-04 12:02 AM

uppin i think this needs to be looked at a lot more

OrEo da cookie 10-28-04 12:06 AM

nice as hell we should collab man itll be a nice drop

In-Vision 02-22-05 03:27 AM

uppin this...it needs to be upped..regardless of age


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