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10-08-04, 02:40 AM
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IP: AF76 A123
.:.My Love.:. you were my teacher, showed me the meaning of inner beauty.. you Inspired me, you were the cause for my ingenuity.. You transformed my thoughts to accurately placed blots.. told me I could change lives with a song if i connected the dots.. I sacraficed my life for you, still livin but would make the same difference dead.. try to run from suicide, than i hear the devil laughin in my head.. It's like he knows whats comin, i am no longer a servant of jesus.. How could I be when love is a biblical trait, and yet he chose to deveive us.. deception is common, but i never thought you or the lord would plot against me.. I hate myself because you don't love me, watch me turn my wrists to mince meat.. .:.My Confusion.:. did i do something wrong? or did you just have a change of heart.. The thought puts me in a tantrum, leavin blood stains and art I had everything baby, a job, friends and undeniable wisdom.. you fucked up my perfect vision, now i view your lies through a prism.. How could we go from best friends to hatin eachother all in an instant.. My mom loved you too, i had your essence in my veins as an infant.. But now i see you for who you are, you were born devils advocate.. exposed my soul and my brain to you, and you sat there and blasted it.. Now i'm dying, slowly, but theres no question about it.. wait a minute, I'm young and invincible, i can find a way around it.. .:.My Understanding.:. My life is getting shorter, my hearts broken in two and I'm cold.. i'm lost without you , when things were bad, it was you i would hold.. Thats over now, the law forbids us, even when i asked for repentance oh well, I can feel death upon me as I put my last words into this sentence.. I should have listened to my friends when they told me you were a whore.. revenge is my new obsession, but theres no way i could ever settle the score.. I can't kill you, it's impossible, you don't own any life lines.. don't have a heart or a mind, but your the brain behind this generations crimes.. Now my brain is fried, and I'm gettin dizzy from the sight of blood on my clothes.. don't turn out like me, this is what happens when you let that bitch fuck in your nose.. if yall didn't get this...i'm sorry...
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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10-08-04, 11:51 AM
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You Love My Style.
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IP: 5572 2B68
Wow ...i always love yo drops man transitions were smooth am feelin it flow was there....imagery was there
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10-08-04, 01:53 PM
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IP: AF76 A123
thanks man..uppin
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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10-08-04, 01:59 PM
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IP: 9A07 1297
wow... I always love reading your shit man... your fucking awesome... if you ever put out a cd or demo... Imma get at that shit...
btw... that was awesome, I love the imagry and the way you told the story... fucking awesome. In my books that's a classic... 9.8/10
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10-08-04, 02:33 PM
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IP: AF76 A123
thanks dawg...i'm glad you liked it....thats what it's all about
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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10-09-04, 01:31 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
man your fuckin dope with these topicals to be honest you should change your name to like topicals or something like that yer shits tight i neve runderstand yer punches in battles but its simple to see yer topicals n shit fuckin dope...no swearing thats poetry at its finest lol as i was reading yer drop i am makin a topical called love or soem shit but its gonna hit hard yer verse was kinda explaining the same shit...9.8/10 fuckin dope
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10-09-04, 02:59 PM
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IP: AF76 A123
uppin this.....
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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10-09-04, 04:00 PM
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IP: 758A C811
tight shit cuz.... nice overall very deep and using good vocab and not affecting your flow to do that...
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10-09-04, 10:51 PM
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IP: AF76 A123
thanks bro...up
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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10-10-04, 04:19 PM
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IP: AF76 A123
uppin for the people...
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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10-13-04, 01:49 PM
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IP: E40B 9458
up...up...and away
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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10-20-04, 05:06 PM
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IP: E40B 9458
yall should be peeeppin...instead yall zzzzzzzzziin
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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10-28-04, 12:02 AM
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IP: AF76 A123
uppin i think this needs to be looked at a lot more
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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10-28-04, 12:06 AM
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SEE YA AT THE TOP
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IP: 1EDC 673C
nice as hell we should collab man itll be a nice drop
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02-22-05, 03:27 AM
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IP: AF76 A123
uppin this...it needs to be upped..regardless of age
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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