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Dirty Nigga 10-13-04 10:24 AM

Dopeman vs SPuL
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Verse Dropped By Tonight Like You Said, Homeboy..
G'Luck..

Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 10-16-04 at 10:24 AM

Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in.

System 10-13-04 10:25 AM

Dopeman has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 10:25 AM.

Dirty Nigga 10-13-04 10:28 AM

''I'm back talk that shit now'' like hes 'Young Buck'..
you couldnt even ''work magic'' if u hooked up with david blain ya dumb fuck..
i came up, an your trynna tell me ya 'mo2v8ed'..
when it comes to the council u should be 'MOVED' for bein most hated..
the last battle wasnt even debated, i admit u got the win..
this time around i'ma cut of ya fingers like 'kingpin'..
i aint the olsen twins, see, theres only one ''of a kind''..
may i remind you ya wouldnt assign a noticable text even if u posted em underlined!..
for that loss you gave me i wanna say thanks..
i came back more elevated an unmovable like a tank..
broke bitch, only time you ever see cash an ''banks'' is in your sig..
this kid so dumb i ''fractured his hairline'' so he sported a wig!

explanations..................

opener...under his avy he has ''i'm back talk that shit now'' like young buck says in that song 'work magic'..

second bar, his aim screename is mo2v8ed4life...
an the line after that if you take the number out it spells moved, an we repp the council 2gether..

kingpin line, is ya know...about the bowlin movie, woody harrelson gets his fingers cut off...i used it like he cant type cause i cut his fingers off, ya know?

i think thats about it, if ya dont understand either verses, dont vote..

g'luck spul, do ya thang..

System 10-13-04 12:00 PM

SPuL has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 12:00 PM.

Artemis 10-13-04 12:00 PM

This kid thinks he's so special, and that I also rep his crew
But why in the world would anyone wanna be crew wit you?
You never spit right, you gotta get off the "dope, man"
You couldn't be close to an "icon" if you were in the Pope Van
You like to "Taste the Rainbow", you fag, you're suckin' little
I'll have you reppin' my first initial, like a fuckin' "skittle"
You're uglier than Biggie, but you're poor and live in tents
You can't be the "Realest Nigga" cuz you don't got 50 Cents
"Welcome to the South", you're wack, I'm bein' serious
You must be a fuckin' "bitch", jus look at all those periods (1)
You prolly do have a dick, but it's located up yo tushy
Like yo location states..... you're a fuckin' pussy

(1)-His usertitle

good luck, man. uppin' fo votes. pc

Dirty Nigga 10-13-04 03:44 PM

upin this battle yall.........
dont sleep, honest, well explained votes will be returned

Dirty Nigga 10-13-04 06:27 PM

c'mon dont sleep yall, uppin for votes........
honest well explained votes will be returned..

Artemis 10-13-04 06:58 PM

uppin'............................................ .................................................. ......

KiTTie 10-13-04 07:09 PM

yo, dopeman, nice verse baby...

SPuL, wack shit, the skittle line sucked....

Hitchcock 10-13-04 07:30 PM

Voted For: SPuL

Spul took this battle easily his structure was on point, and punches were pretty nice. Especially the one about>"You must be a fuckin' "bitch", jus look at all those periods"
best punch in the battle so u get mad props for that. Plus ur punches were more creative. Dopeman's flow was just way too juvenile to win this battle
holla at ya boy
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Sik Wit It 10-13-04 08:46 PM

Voted For: SPuL

Lol...Pretty Good Battle

I felt SPuL took this one tho..his punches were harder and had connected...(tha 50 Cents line was aight)..but overall..SPuL had a pretty good flow..a nice structure and tha punches landed...

Dopeman (sHoTTaBoY)
mayn u finally fixed ur structure and got rid of tha caps..(that's wassup mayn)..but yo punches were hard too..but to me i felt like they werent hard enuff to get my vote...tha structure was good and the flow on that piece was aight...

Overall..
SPuL took this one wit harder punches..a nice flow...and a nice structure...

...Enuff Said

*RTF*
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Artemis 10-13-04 10:07 PM

yo, i'l rtf tommorow. uppin' fo now.................................

Artemis 10-14-04 04:12 PM

aiight uppin' this. Why you change yo location usertitle and shit? but it's aiight, man. uppin' this..........

Kawn Flixx 10-14-04 04:21 PM

Voted For: SPuL

ha
Spul you sick as hell lol

I say you take this

my fav line

"You must be a fuckin' "bitch", jus look at all those periods"

and his nam got all dem periods, jus nice

it had a nice flow to it
and was filled wiht punches and personals
structure was nice also

dopeman...

I wasn't really feelin your verse
your opener was like you reppin the south
instead of dssin anybody
and your vocab and word choise was sad
"dumb fuck" is more of a word choice
used in a REAL freestyle battle face to face
and not in RV where u can think of shit

and the prsonals you used were like
sayin he can't have cash...thats not really a diss

I seen betta from you if ur shottaboy

spul wins

pc

Artemis 10-14-04 04:28 PM

^weerd. uppin' this for votes............................................. ...................................


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