Lil-Youngstah vs illuson
 

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6-10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-23-04 at 06:17 PM

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Old battle close

illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-04 12:46 PM.

lil YOUNGSTHA tryin to rap n rhyme but ya well alwasy be a BUSTA so get all the curage ya can MUSTA/
this freestyle battle is PASSION YOU ya practiced it in the mirror n ya own reflection LAUGHED AT YOU/
the next crack i make itll be in ya HEAD lay ya to rest lil boy
go to BED ya might be from CPT but ya got street CRED/
opps excuse me MISS wasnt that a god enough DISS yea ya can pop CRISS/
but i pop GATS ya rhymes r half ASSED ya a real CLASS ACT yea i just SNAPED BACK/
ya name really fits u comein from ya a LIL BITCH a LIL SNITCH suck my DICK/
im strong like a muscle car this is ya last RIDE after this ya just got stripped off ya PRIDE like when micheal jordan left the bulls SIDE/
belive me yall CANT SEE ME october 31st is cumin up suck my HALLOWEENIE/

Lil-Youngstah has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-04 02:29 PM.

illuson Let's do this Shit begin & CountDown
i'll Shoot ya, kill ya & bury u 6-feet underground
Your battle style ain't "Dope", u ain't got no Hope to Win this Fight
My flows like an "illusion", I'm like a "Ghost" u can't see me in ya Sight
Swing to Ya left, Right u even "Throwin" punches in 2 Hook
But this bitch think he a "Halfway-Crook"
This ain't 8 mile dawg, this da RapVerse Stage-Mic
Though u Ain't go Audience u still gettin "Stage-Fright"
Unable to Spit-ya-flow, you startin 2 "Choke"
I'm "Blazin" ya, Into Black & White Ashes, Smoke....

dat's my verse aight.....

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Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

Young - good spit man, I was feelin your flow and your punches was hitten.

Best Line - This ain't 8 mile dawg, this da RapVerse Stage-Mic
Though u Ain't go Audience u still gettin "Stage-Fright"

Worst Line - illuson Let's do this Shit begin & CountDown
i'll Shoot ya, kill ya & bury u 6-feet underground

Illusion - iight spit.. your flow was ok.. and your punches wernt to bad.

Best Line - this freestyle battle is PASSION YOU ya practiced it in the mirror n ya own reflection LAUGHED AT YOU/

Worst Line - belive me yall CANT SEE ME october 31st is cumin up suck my HALLOWEENIE/

OVERALL - Good battle, but I gotta give this to young, he came harder.. his flow was better.. and his punches were better. Ill you need to work on your flow a lil bit and work on some stonger punches.

Vote - Young

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aight still uppin for votes on da battle..................

still uppin for votes don't let this battle get slept on.........

uppin for votes on da battle........don't let this battle get slept on

Voted For: illuson

flow and struct: goes to lil YOUNG his was easier to follow
pnches: ill had the most and harder hitters
multis: ill have to say a tie
Enjoyment: both were ok but ill pulled it out more on the closer
no personals really
metas goes to Ill as well he used them more

Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

i was feeling lil better because of
nice opening verse
punchlines good
wordplay was pretty dope
structure better to read then illuson
overall was good

keep elevatin both of ya no hate or notin on these vote