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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-23-04 at 06:17 PM

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illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-04 12:46 PM.

lil YOUNGSTHA tryin to rap n rhyme but ya well alwasy be a BUSTA so get all the curage ya can MUSTA/
this freestyle battle is PASSION YOU ya practiced it in the mirror n ya own reflection LAUGHED AT YOU/
the next crack i make itll be in ya HEAD lay ya to rest lil boy
go to BED ya might be from CPT but ya got street CRED/
opps excuse me MISS wasnt that a god enough DISS yea ya can pop CRISS/
but i pop GATS ya rhymes r half ASSED ya a real CLASS ACT yea i just SNAPED BACK/
ya name really fits u comein from ya a LIL BITCH a LIL SNITCH suck my DICK/
im strong like a muscle car this is ya last RIDE after this ya just got stripped off ya PRIDE like when micheal jordan left the bulls SIDE/
belive me yall CANT SEE ME october 31st is cumin up suck my HALLOWEENIE/

Lil-Youngstah has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-04 02:29 PM.

illuson Let's do this Shit begin & CountDown
i'll Shoot ya, kill ya & bury u 6-feet underground
Your battle style ain't "Dope", u ain't got no Hope to Win this Fight
My flows like an "illusion", I'm like a "Ghost" u can't see me in ya Sight
Swing to Ya left, Right u even "Throwin" punches in 2 Hook
But this bitch think he a "Halfway-Crook"
This ain't 8 mile dawg, this da RapVerse Stage-Mic
Though u Ain't go Audience u still gettin "Stage-Fright"
Unable to Spit-ya-flow, you startin 2 "Choke"
I'm "Blazin" ya, Into Black & White Ashes, Smoke....

dat's my verse aight.....

aight let's start this uppin for votes on da battle.......

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Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

Young - good spit man, I was feelin your flow and your punches was hitten.

Best Line - This ain't 8 mile dawg, this da RapVerse Stage-Mic
Though u Ain't go Audience u still gettin "Stage-Fright"

Worst Line - illuson Let's do this Shit begin & CountDown
i'll Shoot ya, kill ya & bury u 6-feet underground

Illusion - iight spit.. your flow was ok.. and your punches wernt to bad.

Best Line - this freestyle battle is PASSION YOU ya practiced it in the mirror n ya own reflection LAUGHED AT YOU/

Worst Line - belive me yall CANT SEE ME october 31st is cumin up suck my HALLOWEENIE/

OVERALL - Good battle, but I gotta give this to young, he came harder.. his flow was better.. and his punches were better. Ill you need to work on your flow a lil bit and work on some stonger punches.

Vote - Young

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aight still uppin for votes on da battle..................

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still uppin for votes don't let this battle get slept on.........

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uppin for votes on da battle........don't let this battle get slept on

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Voted For: illuson

flow and struct: goes to lil YOUNG his was easier to follow
pnches: ill had the most and harder hitters
multis: ill have to say a tie
Enjoyment: both were ok but ill pulled it out more on the closer
no personals really
metas goes to Ill as well he used them more

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