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GKillaz05 vs ~DESTINY~
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting good Luck Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-23-04 at 05:25 PM Must drop verse in 90 minutes after check in. |
GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 03:55 PM.
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To spit a whack verse and lose this battle is your destiny...
Why you testin me................. could spit you hottest shit n wouldnt get the best of me... Best be respectin me Destiny cuz I know Im gonna win... Your rhymes are more played out then a fuckin violin... Add your name into my av, your another thing I smoke... I'll give ya 6hours to reply and I bet you'll still choke... Do you really wanna mess wit me?.. the answers yes... I'll win wit sucess - your skill are fictional like the locness... Your rhymes are like the back of a cow... strait shit... Leave RV alone - Your style sucks everyone hates it... Iight.. quick freestyle.. lets see what you got, good luck! |
To spit a whack verse and lose this battle is your destiny...
Why you testin me........... .. could spit you hottest shit n wouldnt get the best of me... Best be respectin me Destiny cuz I know Im gonna win... Your rhymes are more played out then a fuckin violin... Add your name into my av, your another thing I smoke... I'll give ya 6hours to reply and I bet you'll still choke... Do you really wanna mess wit me?.. the answers yes... I'll win wit sucess - your skill are fictional like the locness... Your rhymes are like the back of a cow... strait shit... Leave RV alone - Your style sucks everyone hates it... |
oh well.. second line is screwed up .. your turn
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~DESTINY~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 04:43 PM.
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Here goes..
Blah Batty blee bla bla, do i realy haft say anyhting at all?, I could beat you with my eyes closed and my fingers cut off. You talk shit about you winnin with succes, your a mess, Cant get your shit to gether, just like the rest, heres a test, What is a punch?, Read my verse and you might find out. I control your flow like the amount of tea in the water spout. GKillas, Spreads gay guys with his relics, just like his dad did, I merked him worse than you, so dont choke like your dad agin, I will end this by givin you a daiper to hold in ya piss, Your dick is really small, so I got the kind for Small kids! Peace~~ |
Kinda good i guess.... I like my structure!!...
Well Lets get votes on this!!!~~~ Peace |
Voted For: GKillaz05
To spit a whack verse and lose this battle is your destiny... Why you testin me................. could spit you hottest shit n wouldnt get the best of me... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD PUNCH NICE OPENER Best be respectin me Destiny cuz I know Im gonna win... Your rhymes are more played out then a fuckin violin... ^^^^^^^^^^^^ PUNCH NICE Add your name into my av, your another thing I smoke... I'll give ya 6hours to reply and I bet you'll still choke... Do you really wanna mess wit me?.. the answers yes... I'll win wit sucess - your skill are fictional like the locness... ^^^^^^^^^^ THAT'Z NICE GOOD PUNCHES GOOD FLOW Your rhymes are like the back of a cow... strait shit... Leave RV alone - Your style sucks everyone hates it... ^^^^^^^^^ EHHH NOT AN GOOD CLOSA GKILLA- HAD GOOD VERSE HERE NICE PUNCHES GOOD FLOW NICE WORDPLAYS Blah Batty blee bla bla, do i realy haft say anyhting at all?, I could beat you with my eyes closed and my fingers cut off. You talk shit about you winnin with succes, your a mess, Cant get your shit to gether, just like the rest, heres a test, ^^^^^^^^^^ NICE OPENER "OK" PUNCHES BUT TOO BASIC What is a punch?, Read my verse and you might find out. I control your flow like the amount of tea in the water spout. GKillas, Spreads gay guys with his relics, just like his dad did, I merked him worse than you, so dont choke like your dad agin, ^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE FLOW GOOD PUNCH BUT TOO BASIC MAYNE USE CREATIVE PUNCHES I will end this by givin you a daiper to hold in ya piss, Your dick is really small, so I got the kind for Small kids! ^^^^^^^^^ GOOD CLOSA DESTINY-HAD AN "OK" VERSE GOOD FLOW NICE PUNCHES BUT WERENT CREATIVE TOO BASIC OVERALL=DIS BATTLE IS "OK" NICE PUNCHES FROM GKILLA AND NICE PUNCHES FROM DESTINY IT CAME DOWN WITH PUNCHES AND DA FLOW IT WAS TIE- DA PUNCHES GKILLA CAME HARDER MORE CREATIVE W/WORDPLAYS DESTINY-IN MY OPINION YA PUNCHES WERE TOO BASIC NEEDS MORE CREATIVE INTO IT,NICE FLOW GOOD PUNCHES BUT WERE TOO BASIC V-GKILLA HE HAD BETTA PUNCHES DESTINY-NEEDS TO WORK ON USING MORE CREATIVE PUNCHES AND USE THEM HARD ~PEACE~ |
O And Post An Feedback In My Open Mic Da Link Its In Da Sig
~peace~ |
Voted For: ~DESTINY~
Destin got this.. I like your opener.... It was cool... Your lfow was nice and your structure was reall good..... You cam really hard with the punches ..... Gkilla.... you were really good too... your flow was nice and i like your punches .... but Destin came harder with them.... Overall ... DESTINY got this ... woith his punches and the opener.... |
Voted For: GKillaz05
Okay this was a kinda weak battle(No hate)But GKillaz got this due to his verse was more complex and just about had better vocab and a lil bit more wit-Some of destiny's lines didnt ryhme so ima have to give this to GKillaz Return the Honest Vote http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=156882 |
Ok......... Perciate the vote.....
Uppin for this biotch~~ pEace~ |
Voted For: GKillaz05
breakdown GKillaz05 Flow-8/10 Punches-7/10 Rhymes-8/10 Structure-8/10 Total-31/40 Destiny Flow-6/10 Punches-6/10 Rhymes-5/10 Structure-9/10 Total-26/40 iigt ima hav to giv dis to GKillaz05 cuz u came out strong and had a god opener Destiny u came out weak but urz was alrite good battle tho |
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Upin for votes~~~~~~ |
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