What it is
These are random things ive written over the years. Nothin special, just decided to post some.
Sittin surrounded, hounds and, goons and goombas Leave the g's for keys, the scene in the room was Quiet, the guy with, connections eyed it, silent While bass pounds, bitches shake pounds, excited As far as the club, all they give him, is racism So he snatched his chips, eclipsed the rays spinnin From the ceilin, Walked out to the alley, peralelled the buildin Still in, a daze feelin, Paranoia like his boy could kill him They call me the god cuz I birthed and made the man From the desert like David, Isaac and Abraham You'd think I'd pray for fans, But I stay cool by dippin more heads in water than Mase's hands Im gettin tired a day can span, a long time before it passes But midnight's, black as mollasses, or Cassius Post fight, after a bastard's, smashed his Eye socket and jaw passed his, limits And the press take a hundred pictures a minute "That aint the industry is it?" I creep in the dark for a drink and a spark Nostalgia, pounds ya, back to a teen on the block I blink and its lost, but for a second Im really livin with my homies before heaven No kiddin, before the blunts gone I blow rythm As it swirled and rose, I saw whirlwind flows Go get em, it said, and I furled my clothes I smoke thorough, but how far thorough can go Never really mattered In the third person, until he had it I feed the piece like Puns the pipe See if I done it right, lungs get ripe Usin fists, Im bringin guns to fight A long kiss with no tongue, goodnight Whether chunks of ice, or baguettes, they stay polished Throw em in a glass, say cheers and Jay hollers So I pray Godless, I cant sleep, fuckin stray daughters Thats enough for now let me know what yall think |
I cant believe yall sleepin on shit.
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it is what it is what it is what it is DAWG!!!!!!!!!
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Who the fuck is this bitch tryin to clown on my shit?
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It was pretty decent. Liked the plot and vocabulary is what gave it a little edge.
Not feelin the name of it though. It didnt really seem like it fits ... But keep it up. |
Yo the name was just some dumb shit. Its not a title. Like i said theyre just random rhymes i pulled out. Theyre completely seperate from each other.
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come on let me get some more feedback on this
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uppin this one more time
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only one person gave any kind of feedback so far on this. What the fuck?
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