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Old 10-23-04, 09:14 PM   #1
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What it is

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These are random things ive written over the years. Nothin special, just decided to post some.


Sittin surrounded, hounds and, goons and goombas
Leave the g's for keys, the scene in the room was
Quiet, the guy with, connections eyed it, silent
While bass pounds, bitches shake pounds, excited
As far as the club, all they give him, is racism
So he snatched his chips, eclipsed the rays spinnin
From the ceilin,
Walked out to the alley, peralelled the buildin
Still in, a daze feelin,
Paranoia like his boy could kill him


They call me the god cuz I birthed and made the man
From the desert like David, Isaac and Abraham
You'd think I'd pray for fans,
But I stay cool by dippin more heads in water than Mase's hands
Im gettin tired a day can span, a long time before it passes
But midnight's, black as mollasses, or Cassius
Post fight, after a bastard's, smashed his
Eye socket and jaw passed his, limits
And the press take a hundred pictures a minute
"That aint the industry is it?"

I creep in the dark for a drink and a spark
Nostalgia, pounds ya, back to a teen on the block
I blink and its lost, but for a second
Im really livin with my homies before heaven
No kiddin, before the blunts gone I blow rythm
As it swirled and rose, I saw whirlwind flows
Go get em, it said, and I furled my clothes
I smoke thorough, but how far thorough can go
Never really mattered
In the third person, until he had it

I feed the piece like Puns the pipe
See if I done it right, lungs get ripe
Usin fists, Im bringin guns to fight
A long kiss with no tongue, goodnight
Whether chunks of ice, or baguettes, they stay polished
Throw em in a glass, say cheers and Jay hollers
So I pray Godless, I cant sleep, fuckin stray daughters

Thats enough for now let me know what yall think
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Old 10-23-04, 09:52 PM   #2
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I cant believe yall sleepin on shit.
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Old 10-23-04, 10:47 PM   #3
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it is what it is what it is what it is DAWG!!!!!!!!!
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Old 10-23-04, 10:56 PM   #4
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Who the fuck is this bitch tryin to clown on my shit?
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Old 10-23-04, 11:31 PM   #5
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It was pretty decent. Liked the plot and vocabulary is what gave it a little edge.
Not feelin the name of it though. It didnt really seem like it fits ...

But keep it up.
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Old 10-23-04, 11:34 PM   #6
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Yo the name was just some dumb shit. Its not a title. Like i said theyre just random rhymes i pulled out. Theyre completely seperate from each other.
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Old 10-24-04, 02:28 AM   #7
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come on let me get some more feedback on this
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Old 10-24-04, 03:23 PM   #8
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uppin this one more time
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Old 10-26-04, 01:17 AM   #9
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only one person gave any kind of feedback so far on this. What the fuck?
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