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Young Drama 11-11-04 06:33 PM

Hot New Real Gangsta Freestyle!!!!!
 
yo, dis isum hot shit

IM GARANTEED
REAL GANGSTA FREESTYLE

20 GraND 11-11-04 06:36 PM

overall ok drop, need more emotions mayne
also flow was a lil off in some places. lyrics were ight
Emotions MAYNE!!! come on i know u got it somewhere lol
holla at me fam! be ezy

Young Drama 11-11-04 06:41 PM

yea, thanx for feedback, uppin dis for da LAST TIME LOL

Young Drama 11-11-04 08:10 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=158964 first link

Young Drama 11-11-04 11:53 PM

uppin dis for da last time period

J-Deezy 11-12-04 12:04 AM

Dawg, Im feelin this track. Keep droppin more man. Lyrics and shit was all hot man. Holla back atcha boy. 1.

Shi-1 11-12-04 07:47 AM

yo check ur p.m. homie!

Enygma 11-12-04 03:18 PM

*listening*

Need some emotion in your shit. You sound like you're whispering. Lyrics were kinda blah, all you're saying is Guns, bitches catching bullets from my gat type shit. Flow was a little off at points too. I know you got potential, cause you actually don't sound like complete ass. You need to sit down and write to a beat, then spit it like 10 times to the beat before you actually start recording so you know exactly how you are gonna spit your shit. Keep dropping :thumbup:

Young Drama 11-12-04 03:22 PM

^ Thank U Finally Contruktive Feedback

Young Drama 11-13-04 02:21 AM

uppin dis for a lil feedback yall


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