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Old 11-11-04, 06:33 PM   #1
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Exclamation Hot New Real Gangsta Freestyle!!!!!

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yo, dis isum hot shit

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REAL GANGSTA FREESTYLE
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Old 11-11-04, 06:36 PM   #2
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overall ok drop, need more emotions mayne
also flow was a lil off in some places. lyrics were ight
Emotions MAYNE!!! come on i know u got it somewhere lol
holla at me fam! be ezy
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Old 11-11-04, 06:41 PM   #3
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yea, thanx for feedback, uppin dis for da LAST TIME LOL
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Old 11-11-04, 08:10 PM   #4
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Old 11-11-04, 11:53 PM   #5
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uppin dis for da last time period
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Old 11-12-04, 12:04 AM   #6
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Dawg, Im feelin this track. Keep droppin more man. Lyrics and shit was all hot man. Holla back atcha boy. 1.
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Old 11-12-04, 07:47 AM   #7
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yo check ur p.m. homie!
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Old 11-12-04, 03:18 PM   #8
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*listening*

Need some emotion in your shit. You sound like you're whispering. Lyrics were kinda blah, all you're saying is Guns, bitches catching bullets from my gat type shit. Flow was a little off at points too. I know you got potential, cause you actually don't sound like complete ass. You need to sit down and write to a beat, then spit it like 10 times to the beat before you actually start recording so you know exactly how you are gonna spit your shit. Keep dropping
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Old 11-12-04, 03:22 PM   #9
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^ Thank U Finally Contruktive Feedback
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Old 11-13-04, 02:21 AM   #10
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uppin dis for a lil feedback yall
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