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Terse. 11-18-04 10:41 PM

Limited Edition vs Kwell
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-18-04 at 11:11 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 11-18-04 10:41 PM

Kwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-18-04 10:41 PM.

System 11-18-04 10:46 PM

Limited Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-18-04 10:46 PM.

L.E 11-18-04 11:12 PM

...A'ight yo...

Kwell's last mission, only way he's sick... he blast kittens...
He's doubtful that he can win...I caught him lookin' at my past winnins*
Wit a wack reputation, his herbness crack and dispute a nation...
...This a battle? This ain' warfare I would call this mass-mutilation
Don't even think about runnin' ya mouth...I'ma knock you out...
...'Cause you in this battle, is like where you live...

...It's headin down south...

Blah quick...I'm rushed...

*I caught him looking at my past battles before he even accepted the challenge.

Terse. 11-18-04 11:19 PM

I'ma end ya sorry career hoe...ya retirement? lemme start it
cuz u on thin ice now, n i'm about ta' leave u heavy hearted
Limited Edition? please, u'll never attain the game's divinity
no creativity, i can see that u Limited in terms of brain activity
dont even diss me like u tough, especially since u aint violent
cuz u can dodge my lefts, till i give u a right ta' remain silent
i'll leave u incomprehensive, like there's liquor ailin ya liver
n like bitches wit tied tubes, dawg u simply fail ta' deliver
talkin to me like u gon crush me, that shit is odd son
cuz like a cyclops tryna wink,
....................u aint got the balls ta' git the job done


blah...

Dj-KiD-> 11-19-04 11:52 AM

Voted For: Kwell

hum a realy close battle here both came good both had the flow n strture had to chose but i got my person hard to chose cuz both came hardish both had every thing but imma give my vote to kwell just came a little hardn had a little bit better flow so he get my vote it was realy close tho but he had the punches just
both good :thubup:

Terse. 11-20-04 05:30 PM

aight, vote appreciated...uppin for more...

Terse. 11-21-04 01:54 PM

uppin this shit...

Abraxas 11-21-04 03:07 PM

This was feedback posted for Kwell
 
i like your metas and similes...................... and yes you merked him....

Sik Wit It 11-21-04 03:18 PM

Voted For: Kwell


I'ma end ya sorry career hoe...ya retirement? lemme start it
cuz u on thin ice now, n i'm about ta' leave u heavy hearted
^^decent opner
Limited Edition? please, u'll never attain the game's divinity
no creativity, i can see that u Limited in terms of brain activity
^^meh…okay
dont even diss me like u tough, especially since u aint violent
cuz u can dodge my lefts, till i give u a right ta' remain silent
^^hmmm…decent here…
i'll leave u incomprehensive, like there's liquor ailin ya liver
n like bitches wit tied tubes, dawg u simply fail ta' deliver
^^okay
talkin to me like u gon crush me, that shit is odd son
cuz like a cyclops tryna wink,
....................u aint got the balls ta' git the job done
^^decent closer

Kwell's last mission, only way he's sick... he blast kittens...
He's doubtful that he can win...I caught him lookin' at my past winnins*
^^meh..decent
Wit a wack reputation, his herbness crack and dispute a nation...
...This a battle? This ain' warfare I would call this mass-mutilation
^^okay
Don't even think about runnin' ya mouth...I'ma knock you out...
...'Cause you in this battle, is like where you live...
...It's headin down south...
^^erm..okay

Overall
Kwell took this one…punches were just
Simply harder than L.E. …and the flow
And structure was aight wit it too..
*Work on ya vocab Kwell
no hate tho*

Terse. 11-21-04 10:20 PM

^i dunno what u mean about my vocab...anyways, uppin for some more votes...

Inception 11-21-04 10:26 PM

Voted For: Kwell

nice battle i thought

le-ya verse seemed kinda rushed u barely did the minumum which was kinda sorry but u only had 1 nice bar to me that mass mutilation line was nice everything else was prety weak i thought seen u come alot harder maybe just doubted him but below standards from what i exspected

kwell- coo verse ya wordplay was tight ina few areas punchs where ight had a few bars that i liked but fuck overall u just had a better verse and came harder all around and that got my vote

return an honest vote in somethin in my sig

M&rk 11-21-04 10:46 PM

Voted For: Kwell

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160852
^^^yo homes return the votes. any....... heres how i saw it

limited yo talked about yourself too much, u aint throw in any wordplay. so this kwell kid wins wit these to wordplay punches which weren't bad at all.

n like bitches wit tied tubes, dawg u simply fail ta' deliver
^^^hot

no creativity, i can see that u Limited in terms of brain activity
^^^not bad, good name usage and lead in.
rest of your lines were alot of fillers but decent drop wit them to lines.


limited-
'Cause you in this battle, is like where you live...

...It's headin down south...
^^^decent attempt at a personal if he was from hmmm... DOWN SOUTH, but hes from cali, get your lines straight, if that was from somone from georgia it woulda been ite

anyway dont rush ya'll battles, hit hard each line, and return the vote wit some honest shit like im droppin here. link at top hit it up playa's

M&rk 11-21-04 10:50 PM

LIMITED EDITION- no hate jus thought of a diss on ya about your title,
not dead..... (y.e.t.) till now you met me mine?
cuz signin in this battle is Y.our E.limation T.ime

anyway hit my battle up wit a vote

DrasticMeasureZ 11-22-04 04:33 PM

Voted For: Kwell

I'ma end ya sorry career hoe...ya retirement? lemme start it
cuz u on thin ice now, n i'm about ta' leave u heavy hearted
Limited Edition? please, u'll never attain the game's divinity
no creativity, i can see that u Limited in terms of brain activity
^^^^^^^^^^^^ U HAD PUNCHES AND FLOW AND SOME PERSONALS DISSING HIS NAME


dont even diss me like u tough, especially since u aint violent
cuz u can dodge my lefts, till i give u a right ta' remain silent
i'll leave u incomprehensive, like there's liquor ailin ya liver
n like bitches wit tied tubes, dawg u simply fail ta' deliver
talkin to me like u gon crush me, that shit is odd son
cuz like a cyclops tryna wink,
....................u aint got the balls ta' git the job done
^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD FLOW NICE PUNCHES THEY WERE DECENT NICE~!

KWELL - U HAD PUNCEHS AND FLOW AND U HAD PERSONALS (DISSING HIS NAME)




Kwell's last mission, only way he's sick... he blast kittens...
He's doubtful that he can win...I caught him lookin' at my past winnins*
Wit a wack reputation, his herbness crack and dispute a nation...
...This a battle? This ain' warfare I would call this mass-mutilation
^^^^^^^^^ FLOW U GOT DEM PUNCHES NEEDS TO WORK ON THEM YO DIDNT FEEL DEM PUNCHES HERE


Don't even think about runnin' ya mouth...I'ma knock you out...
...'Cause you in this battle, is like where you live...

...It's headin down south...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ PERSONAL NICE PUNCH GOOD CLOSA


LIMIT EDITION- U HAD PERSONALS FLOW AND GOOD DECENT PUNCHES




OVERALL

BEST LIMIT EDITION LINE

Wit a wack reputation, his herbness crack and dispute a nation...
...This a battle? This ain' warfare I would call this mass-mutilation


KWELL BEST LINE-

Limited Edition? please, u'll never attain the game's divinity
no creativity, i can see that u Limited in terms of brain activity

OVERALL = OUT OF DEM 2 PUNCHES OF BEST LINE I HAVE TO GO WITH KWELL HE HAD PERSONALS ALL OVA HIS VERSES AND HIS PUNCHES HIT HARDER TOO


LIMIT EDITION- U HAD MULTI'Z AND PUNCHES AND FLOW BUT DEM PUNCHES DIDNT COME HARDER THEY WERE "OK" BUT IF U HAD AN FEW LINES MORE U COULD'VE GOT HIM


VOTE=KWELL


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