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Check in by: 11-17-04 at 09:15 PM

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DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-17-04 08:48 PM.

pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-17-04 08:52 PM.

aiiiiiiiiight let me start keying................word

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THE SLEEP & THE DREAM-

SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

P.S.A

COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM

Your pussy lines remind me of sixty nine
Cuz…..
Not only do they blow, but fuckin suck at the same time

This faggot virgin pushin that pink is cool… he won’t push me
Cuz….
joining a crew called (pink) is the closes your come to inside pussy

this fuckin bitch talks to fuckin much, imma sew his mouth shut
then….
His butt shut so he’ll stop droppin his weak shit so much

Look at this pussies beef its shows he’s a weakling
(avy)…
so imma go ahead and just let my grandma flip it for me

you have no chance;
start tearing your rhyme book… then continue it bitch
cuz that’s the….
only time usin your lyrics you be rippin up some shit

yo, DM’z, you should change your name to Ferris wheel G
and maybe then…
in a battle you could actually `go a~round with me

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COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM

I’ll go through u like an chemical …………acid
Like ya rhymes there fake like ….surgery plastic
Like an broken cd burner ya rhymes do not burned
Me killing u is over-rated so kid iam leavin u burnt
Punches like broken dsl not fast and its not connectin
If I spit on audio I’ll will make u def I’ll Ear-rectdem
Put an deadly needle on ya toungue still couldn’t spit sars
couldn’t deflate my chest if he punch through an chess board
U coming from da u.k change it to U.G underground cause yall neva be stated ( spoken about)
This time u bout to get mummified, put u in an world of hurt strap in bandages
put 10 bricks in ya mouth still couldn’t spit harder punches nor if u did abdominal crunches
Pictrue perfect I think ya lens is crooked and broken cause u cant spit images
I’ll ripp through ur esophagus so u wont be hunger for more, iam killing it


IF U DONT UNDERSTAND MY SHIT THEN DONT VOTE

U coming from da u.k change it to U.G underground cause yall neva be stated ( spoken about)


not swayin just clearin up as soon as possible that i aint from the U.K. i hate them goof troop talkin bitches. im from michigan

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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

soft battle i though

drastic got it though due to tryin some wordplay and metaphors and having punchs that at least connected a lil bit where pictureperfect came with some played shit at first an didnt have enough strong linez to pick up at the end but u also had some wordplay and metas just came with em to late in the verse that opening shit almost made me wanna quit readin it honestly

both had played stuff but drastic had a better verse to me here

honest vote so dont hate

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

this dude won because not only did he have the personalz he had complex lines i like that picture perfecthad 1 good line about let my grandma flip it for me that best line u had and Drastic had bout 8 good lines other 1ns where decent but good metaphors i like dat so i think drastic came harder picture perfect needz some help on da punches cuz u came weak there

Drastic -vote

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COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM

Vote Up Ni99as Mayne Uppppppppppppppppppppppppin........

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THE SLEEP & THE DREAM-

SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

P.S.A

COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM

RAPVERSE.COM IS WACK!........ ya'll dickridin bitches, now i know why i aint been on in a while..... ya'll vote for your friends and come up wit bull shit about the other guy..... "my opening almost made you quit reading" you must be outside your fuckin mind.... your best punch... money it aint better than that one..... 69; suck and fuck at the same time... thats wack... FUCK YOU... YOUR WACK....suck my cock when you get done ridin his.

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Voted For: pictureperfect2

D.M verse....

I’ll go through u like an chemical …………acid
Like ya rhymes there fake like ….surgery plastic
1st line i was feeling 2ed was ok...

Like an broken cd burner ya rhymes do not burned
Me killing u is over-rated so kid iam leavin u burnt
nah i wasnt feeling this....

Punches like broken dsl not fast and its not connectin
If I spit on audio I’ll will make u def I’ll Ear-rectdem
decent word-play...

Put an deadly needle on ya toungue still couldn’t spit sars
couldn’t deflate my chest if he punch through an chess board
decent..

U coming from da u.k change it to U.G underground cause yall neva be stated ( spoken about)
This time u bout to get mummified, put u in an world of hurt strap in bandages
ok but would of word it better to hit alot harder....

put 10 bricks in ya mouth still couldn’t spit harder punches nor if u did abdominal crunches
1st line good 2ed weak mang u could of followed up with something stronger then that....

Pictrue perfect I think ya lens is crooked and broken cause u cant spit images
I’ll ripp through ur esophagus so u wont be hunger for more, iam killing it

ending was preety good...

all around u had a couple of decent lines, 1 weak bar N 1 bar u should of re-word it better all around still a decent drop just need it harder punches...

7.0 outta 10....

next: P.perfect...

Your pussy lines remind me of sixty nine
Cuz…..
Not only do they blow, but fuckin suck at the same time
good opener nice punch...

This faggot virgin pushin that pink is cool… he won’t push me
Cuz….
joining a crew called (pink) is the closes your come to inside pussy
ha decent diss on the crew name...

this fuckin bitch talks to fuckin much, imma sew his mouth shut
then….
His butt shut so he’ll stop droppin his weak shit so much
nah i wasnt feeling this.....

Look at this pussies beef its shows he’s a weakling
(avy)…
so imma go ahead and just let my grandma flip it for me
nah WTF this was weak...

you have no chance;
start tearing your rhyme book… then continue it bitch
cuz that’s the….
only time usin your lyrics you be rippin up some shit
not a bad ending i felt what u was trying to say but u could of re-word it a little better...

yo, DM’z, you should change your name to Ferris wheel G
and maybe then…
in a battle you could actually `go a~round with me
decent ending...

all around u had 2 played bars but a couple of good punches ya creativeness was preety good, personal diss was decent all around tightbattle fellas N all around close one but....

i think picture prefect just edge it out with BETTER PUNCHES N was more creative.....

this aint no hate vote D.M i know how u probley feel and honestly this is a straight up vote far from hate N thats my word.....