blackwell vs M-Dog
 

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3-0 = K.O

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Check in by: 11-22-04 at 10:48 AM

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Win by 3-0 KO

blackwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-19-04 10:54 AM.

ayo this da starter.................
Ite man you beat me before thats "true-ta-say"
Ya gunna get "bruised today"....you need a new way
as youll get left in pieces like saddam n uday coz suxing as many
diks as possile only time youll be da top-head in "UK"!!!! (his profile says his top head in da uk)
Claiming your da king when youve "never-took-crowns"
When ya spittin bitch no one "ever- looks-round"
Ma verbal weather bound to have "shook-sound"
coz ima vet ready ta have this mad dog "put-down"
Peering wit ma optiks, I see this "seed is rotton"
his soft, better believe his "cotton" n he has no relation ta treassure
chests except their both "retrieved at da "bottom" (KO!!!!!)

ayo this da starter.................
Ite man you beat me before thats "true-ta-say"
Ya gunna get "bruised today"....you need a new way
as youll get left in pieces like saddam n uday coz suxing as many
diks as possile only time youll be da top-head in "UK"!!!! (his profile says his top head in da uk)
Claiming your da king when youve "never-took-crowns"
When ya spittin bitch no one "ever- looks-round"
Ma verbal weather bound to have "shook-sound"
coz ima vet ready ta have this mad dog "put-down"
Peering wit ma optiks, I see this "seed is rotton"
his soft, better believe his "cotton" n he has no relation ta treassure
chests except their both "retrieved at da "bottom" (KO!!!!!)

M-Dog has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-20-04 04:29 AM.

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Voted For: M-Dog

M-Dog got this...

Blackwell...ya need to elevate...work on ya structure and try to come harder with punches. u sacraficed good strong punches for multies. multies don't win battles. punches and personals do. u'd tried the uk punch but it didn't work coz the flow was off coz it didn't rhyme.

Ite man you beat me before thats "true-ta-say"
Ya gunna get "bruised today"....you need a new way
multies but no punch^

M-Dog...nice verse...structure was neat...punches hit hard and u had some nice personals in here too, the link worked nicely too..lmao at ya second bar..that was a witty punch.

v/ M-Dog for a better structure harder punches and sucssesful punches...and an overall creative and witty verse.

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This was feedback posted for M-Dog
 

Elevation hasn't occured................since we last past mics,
Think's he's OMB attemptin multies but they don't work right,
^ GUD OPENER..STR8 PUNCH
18 battles and 12 times u experienced a "herb-bashing",
Ur vocabs like ur looks.........them "words ain't dashing",
^^DECENT..NICE WORDPLAY
This the season to be jolly...so why's ya mouth flapping?,
So u concealed ya presence...but u ain't...it's jus ur 'w'rapping,
^LOL..NICE WORDPLAY
Tell ya avy to calm down ya need to lose the combat stance,
Coz u destined to hit ya unlucky number like u fallback fast,
^^GUD PERSONAL
Ya abilities is small that's not why u have a micro-phone,
Coz the last time we went toe 2 toe...lil piggy run back home
^ HIT WIT THA PERSONAL AGAIN...

Ite man you beat me before thats "true-ta-say"
Ya gunna get "bruised today"....you need a new way
^^MULTI...NO PUNCH?
as youll get left in pieces like saddam n uday coz suxing as many
diks as possile only time youll be da top-head in "UK"!!!! (his profile says his top head in da uk)
^^GUD PUNCH...BUT IT DIDNT RHYME
Claiming your da king when youve "never-took-crowns"
When ya spittin bitch no one "ever- looks-round"
^^TOO BASIC
Ma verbal weather bound to have "shook-sound"
coz ima vet ready ta have this mad dog "put-down"
^^AGAIN A BASIC PUNCH
Peering wit ma optiks, I see this "seed is rotton"
his soft, better believe his "cotton" n he has no relation ta treassure
^^DIDNT RHYME...NO PUNCH

BLACK-YOUR punches were too basic, see u attempted multies and wordplay..n did aiight,but a lot of you rhymes didnt rhyme which threw off any flow...struc also was off.

u had one gud punch the "top head in the uk"..if that wudve rhymed n flowed beta it wud be a dope punch...elevate n try makin ya punches wittier/funnier.

mad dog...
to be honest u came kinda average by your standars...a solid consistent verse, that had everythin there, i know u didnt need to come ya hardest..but u took this wit ease

^^fuck cnt vote.lol.

Voted For: M-Dog

M-Dog - Good spit, your flow was set up good and your punches and personals were good.

Best Line - This the season to be jolly...so why's ya mouth flapping?,
So u concealed ya presence...but u ain't...it's jus ur 'w'rapping,

Worst Line - NONE

blackwell - iight verse, you had some good multi's in there and punches wernt to bad.

Best Line - Ma verbal weather bound to have "shook-sound"
coz ima vet ready ta have this mad dog "put-down"

Worst Line - Ite man you beat me before thats "true-ta-say"
Ya gunna get "bruised today"....you need a new way


OVERALL - This battle was decent but I gotta vote for Dog. He came harder wit the punches and personals. Black you need to work on a flow a bit and try throwin some harder punches wit wordplay.

Vote - M-Dog

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