RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   Poetic Scriptures (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=9)
-   -   poet freestyle only half a poet other half soon!! (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=161616)

lil C.A.L.I 11-22-04 10:43 PM

poet freestyle only half a poet other half soon!!
 
it seems the chamber ha had it's way/
no longer is doin time doin childs play/
at every turn the spirits strangled/
lookin for ways out that are only tangled/
thouhgts moving in areas unknown landing in places where nothing is groewn/
through bare`cold bars/
blue eyes stare where a place no one feels tha glare

fluidmoon 11-24-04 05:42 PM

This was a good start of a poem,wish it was longer,it kinda stopped short a bit, but your words were good for the content...keep droppin man...1


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 10:06 AM.