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11-22-04, 11:43 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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poet freestyle only half a poet other half soon!!
IP: 88C4 C811
it seems the chamber ha had it's way/
no longer is doin time doin childs play/ at every turn the spirits strangled/ lookin for ways out that are only tangled/ thouhgts moving in areas unknown landing in places where nothing is groewn/ through bare`cold bars/ blue eyes stare where a place no one feels tha glare |
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11-24-04, 06:42 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 3240 794D
This was a good start of a poem,wish it was longer,it kinda stopped short a bit, but your words were good for the content...keep droppin man...1
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