u had a good thing!
 

dedicated to Leena S. Jacobs...........
you had a good thing and let it go never to be returned.1

hook:
I ain't here to impress you,make you feel special or stress you
the same way that i met you,i can fukin' forget you
i ain't like them otha dudes,dump you then get touchy and miss you
nah.....
i be dat cat that'll fuck you then diss you
cause ima PIMP bitch

verse#1

mah, explain who exactly did you think i was?
i ain't got time to sit and listen to you bitch and fuss
i think "me" would better than tryin' to stick wit' "us"
nomatter how good you suck the dick and lick these nuts
you ain't da' only bitch around cause look i see more butts
prettier faces,slimmer waists,and some e-cup juggs
and im official mah,i ain't just one of these E'd up thugs
i woulda gave you all i had,but you had to be fuk'd up
stole a "G" blamed on "D" and dats why he's lumped up
crash my whip blamed it on Rick thought you'd get away wit' the trick
thought u was slick,but i heard the truth from ya' homegirl Trish
yet you in my face,frontin' like you my down ass bitch
not to mention the dude dat keeps callin' my God damn crib
askin' for you sayin' since june you been his God damn rib
and to think for two joints i took care of you and ya' God damn kids
now i reached the point where i cant care

hook:
I ain't here to impress you,make you feel special or stress you
the same way that i met you,i can fukin' forget you
i ain't like them otha dudes,dump you then get touchy and miss you
nah.....
i be dat cat that'll fuck you then diss you
cause ima PIMP bitch

verse#2
I ain't gon' lie,on the real,i was in love wit' you miss,
but you betray'd my trust,lies comin' flush off ya' lips
remember ur kicks was talkin' and hair wasn't done
'member all ya' nails was broken, n needed milk for ya' son
who was there for you?"me" yeah i was the one
that stuck wit' you when ya' baby daddy would see you and run
moved you into my crib and gave you keys to the doors
everything i worked hard for was easily yours
i even trusted you wit' my hustle when i was leavin' New York
came back the crib was empty,nothin' was left,not even a fork
how somebody rob the house and drew (my dog) aint even bark
i can't believe a word you say when you talk
seems you had plans to have em' trace me wit' chalk
but bitch,i am smarter than the average bear
gimme back the keys to car and the karrots in ears
you say im foul but listen mah, you shoulda handle'd ya biz

hook:
I ain't here to impress you,make you feel special or stress you
the same way that i met you,i can fukin' forget you
i ain't like them otha dudes,dump you then get touchy and miss you
nah.....
i be dat cat that'll fuck you then diss you
cause ima PIMP bitch

i was feelin this... this definatly shoulda be an audio.. good shit tho.. i was feelin certain lies and the way u put it.. "everything i worked hard for was easily yours" <--- hottest line in there ot me.. my favorite.. good shit man.. keep droppin ..-1

tru tru this was dope flow was coo are you gonna do this audio

thx for the feed bak peeps.one day hopefully i'll be able to do this in audio.
thx for the feed tho'.
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werd this would be good on audio...i was feelin it pretty much, the vocab could be a little higher but u still got some and some lines were stretched on text but if this was audio i think it would be smoother...no hate on anythin tho, keep doin your thing

if u want check out my first topical and open mic i put a lot of emotion and shit in it, read all of it if u gonna check it out thanks

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=161856

peace

thx for the feed bak peeps.linal i'll chk ur drop right now.

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feedbak ppl............................................... ...........................

i wasd def feelin this u had flow....this def be on audio it'll sound nice if u had it on audio........but either way its an good om.................but audio will be def for this one.......keep on droppin...............dont stretch cha lines that much.....o and vocab work on that........aiiiiight~!


yo drop an feedback in my om


"in the club"

thanks~!

no doubt peeps.thx for the feed.
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that was pretty sick man good vocabs and flow i felt the topic come hit me up with feed on my drop its only my second one so.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162068

thx for the feed bak.
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