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....Jus testin Lyrix ....... *Breathes in* Fluently pumping that blood of a slave meant 4 Survival Yellin out Testimonies as if i was scripturing a Revival Slowly the Tribulations built up till i couldnt fly Weight Catz resemblin Muscle Loss victims Purely Light Weights Blessed with Ability of Lyricisim and now u KnoThat could get Ugly Like No teeth Havein women and Kodaks U dont kno anything about livin in the Slums with Bums Experiencing feens slap boxing over empty bottlez of Rum If im a Revolutionary i wont be destroyed by my Country No Needles Transactions will attempt to control or Run Me Enviormental Issues get miss used and women get Abused In South Park child dies every show and im supposed 2 Amused Allow me 2 Constrict the Conflicts to all of the fellow Situations About young women movein for dollars experiencing Humiliations on any givin Occasion i could start the Persuasion that im Finished If i provide Street Wise lies then my Prophecy will never be Diminished x4 * wont let my Proverty get the best of me Unspoken Prodigy 2 this unspoken property am i the best lyricist ....Quote Possibly.. its Likely* ,,,Understand theres no stoppin Me* If i was provided with more then 2 eyes then maybe i could Witness these prostitutes that cry 4 help.. and i Would Provide the Helpfullness that God sent me here as a Gift to be considered a Top Lyricist on Everybodys fuckin List U 2 Egatistical about your weaknesses that i can Expose Mental Fustrations Inflitrate my Head until pount of Explode Engraving 10 names on every Hollow tip that i Provide No one notices the young Black Prophecies Homicide We need more warriors instead of Rappers and Actors A shame when children consider 50 cent a role Model Factor look all the Hatred against the Muslims that Supply the Goods I consist the Innocense from every Kid that came from the Hoods cuz i feel i should Deliver the message of Light....If i Could Speak upon the Ressurection of...Troop..... I would * wont let my Proverty get the best of me Unspoken Prodigy 2 this unspoken property am i the best lyricist ....Quote Possibly.. its Likely* ,,,Understand theres no stoppin Me* ....*Breathes out* |
man this is some dope shit, nice rhyme's good flow.vocab is good.
nice drop. return the feed.link in my sig |
Troop=Greatness, always hot dawg, keep it up, u hot, hit up da link in ma sig
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4 sho
im tryin 2 improve every drop thanx 4 supportin |
Umm Work on transitions.
and on Flow kinda............it smooths it out This looked as a freeverse no complexity and topicless. but i have to say it was good. |
4 sho...uppin 4 more honest feed
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oo-shit this was complex, and still flowed straight, and still had a good topic N all around nice drop, vocab was good N all tight mang...
keep them coming... 8.5 outta 10... |
Aight I Like This Piece Str8 Up................emotions And Nice Flow.......kepe On Droppin Troop.............creativity Was Establish In Ya Verse.............and Vocab
Drop An Feedback In My Om "diss To This Kid At Skool-smoke" Yea Drop An Openmic Feedback On That Thanks I'll Preciated |
good drop.vocab n flow was definately there.9/10.keep em comin'
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4 sho...Uppin 4 more feedback
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nice drop man good emotions
nice flow overall 9/10 keep em comin Fluently pumping that blood of a slave meant 4 Survival Yellin out Testimonies as if i was scripturing a Revival Slowly the Tribulations built up till i couldnt fly Weight Catz resemblin Muscle Loss victims Purely Light Weights that was hott man im new to this shyt so hit me up and feed http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162383 |
4 sho ,,thanx 4 the feed
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good drop.... i like that shit
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thanx 4 the feed fam
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