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Lil Nae2 11-27-04 10:12 PM

Un'touched Unloyal(fuck you)
 
Dear Mr. "wanna sound like Red-n-Meth", your only sleepin' on me cause Im' your designated BED OF DEATH/
you been on this board your whole life and you still ain't FAMOUS YET??? :laugh:
Un'touched you were born retarded, somethin your parents couldnt of HELPED/
You might as well stick your dick in your ass because yourfull-of-YOURSELF/
So I suggest you dont try messin wit the E. Finest dawg cuz we spit HEAT/
I'll throw a scratched cd at ya chest so then ya heart will really SKIP---A---BEAT/
:laugh2:
Fuck an unloyal bitch like you you and twobyfour can suck a BIG DICK/
Matta fact you can suck each otha cause dat da only thing yall good fo BITCH/
Im quick with a quarter speed spit that'll make ya quit ya WHOLE SHIT/
And any time u say my rhyme, is enough to bust YO LIP/
U still haven quit rap, cuz u dont even know your SHIT IS WHACK/
Like how Stevie Wonder smiles, cuz he doesnt know HE'S BLACK/
You 'bout 2 get found face down when the BASS POUNDS,
Showin yo wack ass how somethin GREAT SOUNDS/
Keep your eyes in ur socket, my blazing scripts got you JUMPIN FO JOY
Never seen a real woman spit real shit, u still a rookie here HUMPIN A BOY/ :spit: :spit: :spit:

Parallel 11-27-04 10:22 PM

whoa...your stucture makes my eyes bleed...:thumbup:

4Blood2Hound0 11-27-04 10:38 PM

4 disses..... and all he does it talk trash... nice one Lil Nae2

Lil Nae2 11-27-04 10:49 PM

^^^ dats all he can do is talk shit two by four is a punk
Quote:
Originally Posted by Two By Four
whoa...your stucture makes my eyes bleed...:thumbup:

fuck structure bitch its wat da fuckin verse sayin not how it look dumb ass

Un'Touched 11-27-04 10:59 PM

iight lmao at been here all his life this kat has been her 6 months more than me and still un reconized also 6 months damn your only 100 posts up too and during those 8months your loss record musta gotten higher?

Owell

and that should be enuff time to elevate to atleast get into the council

check it unreconized dont fit into AI

Method. 11-27-04 11:01 PM

yea um this was bad wasnt feelin it..

50Cal. 11-27-04 11:03 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Un'Touched
iight lmao at been here all his life this kat has been her 6 months more than me and still un reconized also 6 months damn your only 100 posts up too and during those 8months your loss record musta gotten higher?

Owell

and that should be enuff time to elevate to atleast get into the council

check it unreconized dont fit into AI

DONT WORRY I JUST DROPPED A DISS ON THAT BITCH DONT FUCK WITH A.I SLUT :gfy:

Tha End 11-27-04 11:27 PM

that was tight man structure and flow word use all ther keep on doin ya thing

intensify effect 11-28-04 02:18 AM

this was ok noting really stood out all around decent... 7.0

drop feed back RAP-ology http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162554

Implicit 11-28-04 04:07 AM

this is dumb.........

.......why didnt all of u jus post in the same thread..........

...........structure was horrible punches and wordplay were ok...........

Retro 11-28-04 08:45 AM

Yes.....Agree With Sabo...Battle Un'Touched...OM Diss'es are .... Pointless...

Lil Nae2 11-28-04 09:57 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Un'Touched
iight lmao at been here all his life this kat has been her 6 months more than me and still un reconized also 6 months damn your only 100 posts up too and during those 8months your loss record musta gotten higher?

Owell

and that should be enuff time to elevate to atleast get into the council

check it unreconized dont fit into AI

dats cause i dont spend my whole fukin life on dis website first off end i dont wanna be wit A.I. or da coucil because bitches like u n empire in dere and empire da word slut has really played out next time just say hoe or sumin else damn bitches n un'touched just cus u n A.I dont mean you shit i kno ppl on dis site not even in A.I dats betta den you

PntBlnkDistnce 11-28-04 10:01 AM

yeah im brand new and that was horrible check out my drop http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162583

50Cal. 11-28-04 01:06 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Lil Nae2
dats cause i dont spend my whole fukin life on dis website first off end i dont wanna be wit A.I. or da coucil because bitches like u n empire in dere and empire da word slut has really played out next time just say hoe or sumin else damn bitches n un'touched just cus u n A.I dont mean you shit i kno ppl on dis site not even in A.I dats betta den you

name one :nono:

streetryda 11-28-04 02:10 PM

get outs here making disses on her....cuz you know you cant own up to making one half as decent as me or hounds but you better expect a diss to your faggot asses.....and this beef with un'touched was BEFORE he left MAB to go to AI so yeh dont take it the wrong way......i dont know why empire got in it but w/e just another one to get dissed on....
good drop fam.....keep up the good work:thumbup:
peace~1


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