..Lyrical.. vs TRUTH
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 = Ko

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 11-27-04 at 11:36 PM

Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in.

TRUTH has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-27-04 11:07 PM.

..Lyrical.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-27-04 11:07 PM.

youll neva be compatible to step up to the leval that im currently on/
i read ya shit ya "flows" is non exsistent like water when the current is gone/
the thought of you "pisses me off" so my bladder must be more than full/
claimin you wanna "spit at me" but your accuracy's horrible/
rappins become effortless i just rhyme while i tell a joke or two/
i feel bad cause your family wont be supportive and vote for you/

This was feedback posted for TRUTH
 

i vote for u homei ur new n shyt burt fukk it that was dope and he was weak

Voted For: ..Lyrical..

lyrical gets this one.the other dude was right.his flow is effortless which is why he didn't get my vote

uppin for more votes....
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This was feedback posted for TRUTH
 

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to LYRICAL flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, TRUTH had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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This was feedback posted for ..Lyrical..
 

ehh, decent battle..

both had alright punches, nothin' really stood out to me tho..

v/ lyrical.. because his punches hit a lil harder and were more creative, although it coulda gone either way..

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This was feedback posted for ..Lyrical..
 

youll neva be compatible to step up to the leval that im currently on/
i read ya shit ya "flows" is non exsistent like water when the current is gone/
the thought of you "pisses me off" so my bladder must be more than full/
claimin you wanna "spit at me" but your accuracy's horrible/
rappins become effortless i just rhyme while i tell a joke or two/
i feel bad cause your family wont be supportive and vote for you/
^^^^^^^^^ SOME PLAYED OUT PUNCHES BUT THE FIRST BAR...THE OPENER WAS AN GOOD PUNCH....NO PERSONALS....NOT AN GOOD STAND OUT VERSE FROM YOU TRUTH....PUNCHES WERE PLAYED OUT EXCEPT THE FIRST BAR


I don’t have to try hard, cause this bitch can’t digest rhymes
I’m iller by far...cause his check-in contained his best line
Now watch me fry his bullshit line...I don’t even try to top him
I’m at the very top of this site...He’s from ‘around’ the bottom
So I won’t invest time, in the total destruction of this newbie
If he only used the letters ‘d’ & ‘o’, he still couldn’t out ‘do’ me
^^^^^^^^^^^^ ALRIGHT LYRICAL U HAD SOME PUNCHES AND SOME WORDPLAYS WHICH WAS GOOD FAM...


OVERALL= THIS BATTLE IS ONE SIDED TRUTH U CAME OUT WITH PLAYED OUT PUNCHES AND YA FLOW WAS A LIL CHOPPED UP...EXCEPT THE FIRST BAR IT WAS AN GOOD PUNCHE YOUR OPENER.....AS I READ THROUGHOUT IT ALL YOUR PUNCHES CAME A LIL PLAYED HIT HARDER........LYRICAL U HAD AN GOOD VERSE FLOW....AND PUNCHES....USE PERSONALS NEXT TIME IN YOUR BATTLES...ANYWAY......LYRICAL U GOT MY VOTE CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES MOST COMPLEX VERSE...AND GOOD FLOW


PEACE

DAYUM THIS IS AN FEEDBACK CANT VOTE CAUSE OF 100 POST

SRRY

Voted For: ..Lyrical..

Flow Lyrical
Style Lyrical
Vocab No one
Punches No one
Personals Lyrical
opener Truth
Closer lyrical
who tryed harder lyrical
winner lyrical