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Check in by: 12-11-04 at 11:32 AM

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lil C.A.L.I has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-11-04 11:03 AM.

.Aeral. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-11-04 11:06 AM.

im killin herbie(s) steppin to me is like a crash up derby
they about as soft and fake as a fuckin furby
fuck a wikkidclown merkin him so bad im renown
punches slippin like a drunk in a dui test
have this kid shot in his hip layin him to rest
only lettin him know not to fuck with da best
kid you really suck u look like a fucking schmuck
runnin there trap only gettin me to grab my strap
talkin like u tough makin me bust shells buckin a cap
merkin lil kids who talk strong who cant rap
only thing u clappin is when u do syllables
where u from W/P/B?
my raps so hot ill have this rap in a knot
weather u like it or not

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Voted For: .Aeral.

damn.....Aeral you killed him.....

Punches-LOL Aeral got this one i liked this line righht here its what killed um..."leave ya insides like accappella when I take out your (heart) beat" that was tight right there....lol damn....lil cali you needta learn how ta diss like that right there......

Personals-overall i'd say this one goes to Aeral he dissed ya record Lil cali you just talked shit....lol man Aeral i can tell you aint no rookie bringin shit like that...i liked this line for a personal-"You're invisible in R.v. , sorry but I'm just sayin the truth..
..Cos Ae's got around 20 post... & still more respected than you" that was nice.....lil cali again just shit talkin ....

Vocab-Overall they wasn't really no hard vocab going on...but the basic vocab Aeral was bringin lol...damn it made it work.....ya feel me on this one??????

Enjoyment-Overall i enjoyed reading Aeral's drop 100% more..it was nice...i mean it wasn't as weak and basic as Lil Cali's....man cali your teaching's aint really help huh??

Notes: ok Lil cali you need to up on ya punches,personals,and multies,and vocab.....Aeral you have nice punches and nice personals you just need to up on ya Multies and Vocab.....

nice battle return favor...any battle in my sig

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Voted For: .Aeral.

aeral gets my vote cuz he came harder and he had betta punches and personals.he came witty with it and lil cali had played rhymes about guns. lil cali lacked wittyness and stronger personals.so my vote goes to..........

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Voted For: .Aeral.

.Aeral. took the cake on this one... It definately had a better feel at the beginning and end. It definately had better rhymes as well, instead of having simple rhymes.

Thanks for the votes, uppin' this for more..........

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