Troubled Lifestyle
stepping quietly,making sure no-one is around.
all I hear is the wind,and stick's breaking on the ground sneaking,while walking,I keep look out over my shoulder I never thought this is how it would end,thought I'd die much older keeping my eye's open,and constantly aware I never thought I would go thru with this dare I thought i wouldnt,but obviously I do care Feeling's run thru my spine,Know I no the feeling of true fear I hear a noise to the left, I speak quietly,yet load enough for them to hear "who's that? whos there? the scamper away leaving me in chill's now I can see why people pre-write there will's Im stuck hear,with no option to carry on forward. i wish I had a weapon anything,even a swored no one around nme ,not even the lord i carry on there's no turning back why did i let my self get into this postition im to scared to even start wishen, deperate feeling's running thru my vain's i wish some 1 was with me ,so they could feel my pain's |
good :thumbup:
u had flow rhymes don o bout stuckture but u did well :thumbup: |
uhm thanx. whew....
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*agrees*
all good cept for structure.. that's good comin form me..cuz I'm mean to everybody ask aroundzzz |
ok baby boi you must be a pro. lol
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lol yes I am... |
I Know a pro at making the ladies happy....
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Felicia..........................carm down.................
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ok i will i will.........
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free psot but its iite. upping this song.
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yeah good flow but work on the structure all in all lmfao but hit me up im new so w/e
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162583 |
ok babe I will.
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