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Lost but not found...
...I know I've shot out my mouth at times... ...I know I've been out of line... ...From the day I learned how to rhyme... ...Anger covered my eyes took me over and now I'm blind... ...I've spit pages of rhymes, and yeah some were dated... ...But now I bring fire every time but still I'm underrated... ...My open mics will go unviewed for days at a time... ...Some vets still ain't read my shit, yet i stay on the grind... ...But it wasn't always like this, lets go back to the start... ...When I used to have respect, but only half of the heart... ...Kuniva, haha, who even remembers that shit... ...That was way back in the times of the original clas sic... ...But i started getting busy, I couldn't find the time to spit... ...When i came back 2 months later, suddenly everything thats mine was shit... ...But I had so much to say, I knew it wasn't time to quit... ...But there was a hill in front of me, and I knew i couldn't climb the shit... ...But look at me now, holding the ropes strapped in a harness... ...Gotta show you who's the best before my reputations tarnished... ...Or tarnished, any more than is... ...I can't explain to you how important it is... ...I gotta prove to all the doubters, that my skill was never lost... ...Thats worth more to me, than anything could ever cost... ...And when I rap, I take in to consideration all things... ...Cause unlike most, I care what yall think... |
nice drop mann good topic an honestly thats key man keep em comin
nice flow u had some hott lines in there nice drop overall man 9/10 hitt me up some feed playa http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1765804 ![]() |
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u gonna feed on my shyt or what man either way its straight this one u got was dope
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Ayo Nice Shit Fam...
Nice Stable Flow To It... Seemed Like You Wanted More To Get Shit Off Your Chest Then Worry About Flow... Wich Was Nice, Gave Your Words Depth... Pretty Nice Overall Mayn... .One. |
Nice Shit You Had Nice Flow And Some hott Lines In this One Keep Droppin Werd -1 |
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Nice drop, your vocab was was descriptive and flow was good in this piece, keep em comin...9/10,had a poetry feel to it.1
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stucture wasent there but who cares ive seen you use stucture before...but other den that the vocabulary was dope...the emotion was fire hell dis single is fire...weerd...9/10
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