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Young Drama 11-28-04 06:12 PM

"Front'n' Empire Diss
 
You Been Talkin A Lot Shit About My Crew Well Im Here To

Verse 1

I kept my mouth shut and watched you continue to boast superior~
but i realized you frontin, u not a nigga, ashy white overlaps ya exterior~
the rest of this site may cower in ultimate fear~
u got no real battle skills, but your wackness is covered by beef bein ya whole career~
im sick of niggas backin down like u scary~
when the truth is, u look like the HIP HOP DREW CAREY~
u went from Caliph 2 Empire then along came D-Iced~
u took it out ya avator but homie, that was u gettin sliced~
u should be a vegitarien, cause you would be a cannibal eatin pork~
and the fuck yo rap name gonna be C.A.L.I. when u from New York~
Ghetto Shakespere my ass, u must have blindness~
and aint even funny how u cant fuck wit E.'s Finest~

50Cal. 11-28-04 06:15 PM

this was pretty good a 7/10 i will respeonde when i get back of course

Young Drama 11-28-04 06:16 PM

thanx, at least u aint gonna be a dick and juss say i suck cause its on u

Lil Nae2 11-28-04 06:40 PM

nice diss man punches was good

Young Drama 11-28-04 06:46 PM

yea, thanx yo...............................

Hoodz Prophet 11-28-04 08:18 PM

dopetastic home boy 8/10 nice personalz an punchez

Young Drama 11-28-04 08:21 PM

yea, thanx yall, uppin dis still

Acuity 11-28-04 08:25 PM

yo of the chain homie - 8.2/10 nice punches and bare personals............told me sum shit bout empire i didnt know man was sick......was dope....but xpect emp 2 come bak hard......u represented hard 4 E.finest mad props man. Chek sum of ma battle n drop an honest vote man. Peace

PntBlnkDistnce 11-28-04 08:40 PM

that was some dope shyt man nice flow felt it all the way from beginin to end nice punches and metas but yeah man dope work bro keep uppin n post a hit on my drop

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162583


Young Drama 11-28-04 08:41 PM

ur jus givin everybody good feed so they can hit u up, u fuckin d/r

i had no metas in there

i hate niggas like this

PntBlnkDistnce 11-28-04 08:43 PM

i meant to say add metas but thats aright u son of a bitch

Un'Touched 11-28-04 09:34 PM

Werd Not To Bad Pretty Nice Punches 8/10
All you need to work on is your structure try makin the size 1 and bold and also centering it just try it once and post something it looks much better and the lines wont be sooo stretched

streetryda 11-28-04 09:56 PM

yeh man nice drop lol came hard reppin right there.......but uhh if you post in tahoma font ya lines wont look so stretched.....
8/10
peace~1

FlowIntelligent. 11-29-04 12:05 AM

this was a good piece i was feeling these bars:

im sick of niggas backin down like u scary~
when the truth is, u look like the HIP HOP DREW CAREY~

u should be a vegitarien, cause you would be a cannibal eatin pork~
and the fuck yo rap name gonna be C.A.L.I. when u from New York

those were type hot work on ya structure tho

8/10

Parallel 11-29-04 12:27 AM

well you cant compeit with empire but this alright...not to hard of punches but theres a few...6.5/10


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