Quickie:8 bars/romeo diss
 

yo

you wake up in da morning in fame you got it
goin on/a richie rich boi only cuz youz a
daddy boi

gettin lucky wit half of ya family
in da game/ya show iz whack
and ya rhymes-,is lame

ya would of done betta at just
being handicapp/den maybe i'd have
at least just one reason not to cap

got Canon on da side workin ya beats
fo ya/i betcha dat ya neva beated
on a kitchin table befo' nigga

imma real nigga,i doubt dis bout you
but i gets hard tymes/you got ya parents
pitchin' in ya lil quartas and dymes

i listened to ya verses befo' you didnt even
have da right amount bars and lines/ya fuckin
newbie to bad you shouldv'e quit and just sniffed lines

let me know when you've been
though dem bad parts/wit three
pounds of kilo hidin from da cops in da dark

or let me know when you done had
da weight of da world on ya nuts/or actually
lived da life of a human being and not a fuckin' star

feedback please
anything

this was sorry fo'real, i dont think lil'romeo is good at all but blaming him for being rich his ignorant, his father worked for his money and romeo cant work or nuttin so u cant say, he should have to work for his money, ur a dumbass

and in the rhymes section, ur garbage, u need a tuturial on how to flow, nigga u really suck fo real, 0.1/10

u got some pre=skoo lyrics dawg, im 13 and atleast my lyrics is nice

keep workin on ur flow man link the subjects n shyt but yeah bro keep uppin n post a hit on my drop

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162583

yo,lol,ma up this myself jus so ppl so can see how not to rap

uppin dis yall...........................................
lol...........................................