King~~Dipset vs warrior
 

Battle Rules:

5-6 Bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 70

Check in by: 12-03-04 at 06:07 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

King~~Dipset has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 06:10 PM.

aii Here I Go

Ill merk dis jerk Catchem Jackin his Johnson Tryn 2 get growthspurt* ( Get It? )
I Bet U take dicks Up da ass....Den notice how da truth hurts*
//1

Ill make ya punches feel like pats n look Yo Ova Like a scanner
and I seen Dat ive Fucked U up Mo times than a porno Banner
//2

Im On fire Dude .....u Jus Gonna supply The Gas
Ill Smoke Yo ass So Bad Da voters gonna need oxygen Masks*
//3

There Is no Way 2 Stop Me like chuckie i got An evil Seed
But killin is a hobby for me So they jus call me evil deed
//4

U Suppose To B a warrior But you aint put up A fight
U Suppose To B My Daughter But all I C is A Dike
//5

I Come like Daytime so I turn Out Ya Light
when I knock ya ass out I get no responce from U like yo open mics
//6
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1st *
Jackin a Jack Makes It grow so he Thought jackin his Dick was either Gonna Make him grow Or his Dick

2nd*
He takes It up The ass so when he gets fuck he notice The Truth ( which Is that He takes it up the ass) hurts

3rd*
When I smoke This Bastard when voters come to vote They Gonna need an oxygen Mask.
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If you dont undertsand then plz Dont Vote
Peace

warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-04 01:06 AM.

ya verse wouldnt get red(read) if u wrote it wit ya wrist-slit/
and who needs noobs for easy wins when we got king~~dipshit/

i spit-sick this bitch-gets riped-quick without a doubt/
u on my dick like lipstick when ya bitch pull me out her mouth/

ill rip ya dumb text and i aint gon break one sweat/
i asked him if he gon come hard he said im only 14 i cant cum-yet/

im gettin tired of beatin herbs wit a keyed verse so y do i do it/
its kinda pointless ur verse already makin yaself look stupid/

between rapverse and porn, Kings constantly on the computer/
"tell NBC to cancel the show cause we found THE BIGGEST LOSER"/

uppin.............................................

up up and away....................................

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Voted For: warrior

kings-
punches and structure wansnt there....hard to follow long wit.
Warrior had better punches and had a much stronger readable verse
both need to elevate a lil king needs to more than tha warrior tho so my
vote=Warrior

check my battle out http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=163844

This was feedback posted for King~~Dipset
 

Yo last line was hot u nice I think hot but stop usin those baby rhymes other than that that was hot this was a tie nice battle

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