FUCK U dont like my style i dont Curr...
 

Wreck |straps these vets| And My Fucking Bars |Clap with Threats| My GUns Loading I'll |Cap your Set| .:.(set = dome)(cap=shoot)
This Dog WIll Get |Crapped and Wet| I'll Save Ya Salt Iodine in My Blood COntainer While I |Wrap your Sweat|

Wreck SCARS-his-FOES And Your FAR-from-PRO My Lyrics Leave You BIZZARE-wit-BLOWS And Like Iced Rivers Your BARS-dont-FLOW//
Why Should I SPAR-a-HOE I'll K.o And Let You See STARS-that-GLOW And Mat PARS-wit-SNOW And This Ya Death I'll Leave Ya Flour(Flowers) Like Your TAR-in-DOUGH//

Lyrical Calibas Are Sad To SEE-another-DEAD You Fucking Hoe Ya KNEES-always-SPREAD This FLEA-get-SHRED Dont Worry I Already Know This MC-gives-HEAD//
You Aint No Man Cuz I Already Know This BRII-never-READ My Gat Bout To FREE-the-LEAD This G-will-see-RED Leave Ya Corpse And DEBRIS-in-this-THREAD//

Well Thats It DOnt Like It

...I DONT GIVE A FLYIN FUCK

Fuckin Uppin....

Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight@this............

^^WAS THAT A RATING...just curious

well why did you make this OM if you don't "curr" what other people think?
that's what Open Mic is for.........

HONEST FEEDBACK:)

^^no i wanted people to rate my verse ... not my lines

Uppin............

BUmp^>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

uppin,.........

this is ok

.:.(set = dome)(cap=shoot)
^^get rid of this sorta shit,when ir ead a open mic, I spit it. Having this in there fuck's with my flow.I try spiting it,then get mixed up.

you have dope multi's. but once in a while they seem forced.

?And Mat PARS-wit-SNOW <not to sure what this mean's.

TAR-in-DOUGH<seemed forced to me.

That is the only thing i can see. The rest is dope, like your flow.good multi's.
keep dropping

thanks my nigga fidel

thats sum tuff shit. ur lyrics r good, but u need to work on ur flow a little

thanks uppin...

Like fi-del said, some of your multies seemed a little forced...Other than that, they were vicious...feeling this man...hot shit...stay up...1

thanks uppin...