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12-02-04, 06:38 PM
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FUCK U dont like my style i dont Curr...
IP: CD39 63AE
Wreck |straps these vets| And My Fucking Bars |Clap with Threats| My GUns Loading I'll |Cap your Set| .:.(set = dome)(cap=shoot)
This Dog WIll Get |Crapped and Wet| I'll Save Ya Salt Iodine in My Blood COntainer While I |Wrap your Sweat| Wreck SCARS-his-FOES And Your FAR-from-PRO My Lyrics Leave You BIZZARE-wit-BLOWS And Like Iced Rivers Your BARS-dont-FLOW// Why Should I SPAR-a-HOE I'll K.o And Let You See STARS-that-GLOW And Mat PARS-wit-SNOW And This Ya Death I'll Leave Ya Flour(Flowers) Like Your TAR-in-DOUGH// Lyrical Calibas Are Sad To SEE-another-DEAD You Fucking Hoe Ya KNEES-always-SPREAD This FLEA-get-SHRED Dont Worry I Already Know This MC-gives-HEAD// You Aint No Man Cuz I Already Know This BRII-never-READ My Gat Bout To FREE-the-LEAD This G-will-see-RED Leave Ya Corpse And DEBRIS-in-this-THREAD// Well Thats It DOnt Like It ...I DONT GIVE A FLYIN FUCK
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12-02-04, 06:42 PM
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IP: CD39 63AE
Fuckin Uppin....
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12-02-04, 06:49 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 2E43 6BFE
Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight@this............
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12-02-04, 06:50 PM
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IP: CD39 63AE
^^WAS THAT A RATING...just curious
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12-02-04, 06:57 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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IP: 8413 F2EB
well why did you make this OM if you don't "curr" what other people think?
that's what Open Mic is for......... HONEST FEEDBACK 
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12-02-04, 06:59 PM
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IP: CD39 63AE
^^no i wanted people to rate my verse ... not my lines
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12-02-04, 07:05 PM
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IP: CD39 63AE
Uppin............
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12-02-04, 07:24 PM
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IP: CD39 63AE
BUmp^>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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12-03-04, 06:02 AM
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IP: C86C 44DE
uppin,.........
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12-03-04, 06:23 AM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
this is ok
.:.(set = dome)(cap=shoot) ^^get rid of this sorta shit,when ir ead a open mic, I spit it. Having this in there fuck's with my flow.I try spiting it,then get mixed up. you have dope multi's. but once in a while they seem forced. ?And Mat PARS-wit-SNOW <not to sure what this mean's. TAR-in-DOUGH<seemed forced to me. That is the only thing i can see. The rest is dope, like your flow.good multi's. keep dropping |
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12-03-04, 05:07 PM
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IP: CC99 3761
thanks my nigga fidel
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12-03-04, 05:37 PM
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IP: AE0C B6C3
thats sum tuff shit. ur lyrics r good, but u need to work on ur flow a little
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12-03-04, 06:01 PM
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IP: CC99 3761
thanks uppin...
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12-03-04, 06:04 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 3240 794D
Like fi-del said, some of your multies seemed a little forced...Other than that, they were vicious...feeling this man...hot shit...stay up...1
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12-03-04, 06:10 PM
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IP: CC99 3761
thanks uppin...
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