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Identical vs Spul
Battle Rules:
12-14 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Absolutelt No D/R No Hate it's me again SPul, i'll explain why the new account after we drop our verses Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 12-17-04 at 01:44 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Deal
Spul will get his no-show loss removed if he wins
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Identikal has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-14-04 03:55 PM.
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SPuL has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-14-04 03:56 PM.
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Say DQ wins are wack, you shouldn’t keep them on the shelf I should call you John Kerry, cuz you contradict yourself I'll have yo head spinnin' like wheels on bicycle Change yo name again, but the result will be indentikaL My rhymes are cerebral, hit you wit ‘em, say "you’re mental" And I’ll beat you wit no words, like you was an instrumental The guards lift you off, and then I sky up like a rocket Your rhymes stink like a foot, so it’s ‘bout time that you sock it When people see yo face, they always start to act a fool You get many people runnin’… “Are you the last day of school?” I’ll separate yo lines up, like I was a fuckin’ comma Put two L’s on yo name and then say, “You suck, ‘LLama”’ (Beat him once already) weerd... up for votes |
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it's no shock kid is fraud, inherited terrorist genes so he's the type to carry bombs if ghostwriters are rv's version of steroids then u've been exposed like barry bonds dml...? now i guess when it comes to online relationships u seem to be the better man child fame...naw, spul seems to be the result of his father getting raped at neverland kid has got no life, stays on rv when he's bored, it even shows in his thread names came out the closet, he even admitted to having dsl,.... .................................................. ...now wonder why he likes to perform headgames u was all excited and geeked, pm'ing me on AIM just to tell me about ya chat bot ya not wanted here, ya pops should've have just left u... ............................................as a stain by his playboy magazine and his crack pot said ya got banned for biting a quote...well god damn i guess u still ain't learned no fucking...clinic fertilization, we all know that u was born from an inmates sperm i remember her well, ya mom was the only woman i knew that could give head long but i guess if i were to go to her grave site... .................................................a nd piss on her tombstone i would be dead wrong i'm about ready to fuck this bitch, flavored condoms, someone hand me a tan rubber ok now let's see, kyrogenix, latinkitten,... .......................i guess for future ghostwritings spul could just ask his grandmother |
uppin for honest explained votes people, lets get some votes
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uppin for honest explained votes people, don't vote on anything but who won, no bias shit
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does anybody fucking vote, uppin for honest explained votes
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Voted For: SPuL
1) didnt other cat go over limit? 2) spul won opener: spul closer: spul wordplay: spul - came wit mad wordplay in dis, even highlighted it 4 us personals: identikal - these were ok, nuttin crazy punches: spul - ident had personals and used em but he neva really punched with 'em originality: meh, tied multis: neitha lyrics: identikal flow:spul structure:spul - other cats was strecthed overall spul - 8.5/10 identikal - 7/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for SPuL
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Voted For: SPuL
Identikal: it's no shock kid is fraud, inherited terrorist genes so he's the type to carry bombs if ghostwriters are rv's version of steroids then u've been exposed like barry bonds Decent opener, a little stretched, but ok dml...? now i guess when it comes to online relationships u seem to be the better man child fame...naw, spul seems to be the result of his father getting raped at neverland Weak... kid has got no life, stays on rv when he's bored, it even shows in his thread names came out the closet, he even admitted to having dsl,.... ...now wonder why he likes to perform headgames Ok personal u was all excited and geeked, pm'ing me on AIM just to tell me about ya chat bot ya not wanted here, ya pops should've have just left u... ...as a stain by his playboy magazine and his crack pot Ok set up, but turned out weak... said ya got banned for biting a quote...well god damn i guess u still ain't learned no fucking...clinic fertilization, we all know that u was born from an inmates sperm Decent punch, nothing too special i remember her well, ya mom was the only woman i knew that could give head long but i guess if i were to go to her grave site... ...and piss on her tombstone i would be dead wrong Mom lines are played, this didn't hit very hard i'm about ready to fuck this bitch, flavored condoms, someone hand me a tan rubber ok now let's see, kyrogenix, latinkitten,... ...i guess for future ghostwritings spul could just ask his grandmother Ok closer, good personal also SPuL: Say DQ wins are wack, you shouldn’t keep them on the shelf I should call you John Kerry, cuz you contradict yourself Decent opener here I'll have yo head spinnin' like wheels on bicycle Change yo name again, but the result will be indentikaL Nice play off his name here, although bicycle and Identikal don't rhyme too well, that brings this bar down a lil' bit My rhymes are cerebral, hit you wit ‘em, say "you’re mental" And I’ll beat you wit no words, like you was an instrumental Nice wordplay here, ok punch The guards lift you off, and then I sky up like a rocket Your rhymes stink like a foot, so it’s ‘bout time that you sock it I liked this, good shit here When people see yo face, they always start to act a fool You get many people runnin’… “Are you the last day of school?” Weak... I’ll separate yo lines up, like I was a fuckin’ comma Put two L’s on yo name and then say, “You suck, ‘LLama”’ Nice personal here, I noticed you were playing off his physical resemblance to Banks Winner: SPuL, for harder punches, better wordplay...overall a better verse. Identikal, your structure was off, you gotta work on fixing those stretched lines. They were consistent throughout your entire verse, and that brings it down quite a bit. But other than that you had an aight drop, so no hate. RTF at a link in my sig... |
This was feedback posted for SPuL
voted spul:
punches were better, wordplay was decent, ya had some good perosnals. some lines were a little jumbly, but for the most part, you had a straight verse, ending was aight, the opener was good, identikal was too stretched, that was his main weakness, needs some improvement, not horrible, just decent. vote is still spul. close battle. |
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