Reborn aka Cenario aka Banks aka Identikal, etc.. First spit
 

weerd... I mixed it for him and put it up on mine, cuz he got no SC.

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damn i mixed it for him too. must of not liked my mixing

oh yeah nvm. it didnt send properly. oh well

this tracks koo

just lacks flow

^^LMFAO AT THIS HATER ANYWAYS SHIT HAD DOPE FLOW HE SOUNDS LIKE MASE WHICH ISNT GOOD :(YOU SHOULD SOUND LIKE YOURSELF BUT ANYWAYS LYRICS OK COULD BE WAY BETTER FLOW IS DOPE GOOD VOICE TOO

Stop being so shy on the mic. Spit like you got a pair....lol. Anyway, this wasn't bad at all for a first spit....might be because you had a little help editing, but either way, shit was alright. You fall off the beat a little but it takes time getting your flow down perfectly......I suggest you spit the verse about 5-10 times all the way through before you even record. This helps you get comfortable with the verse, so when you read it, you know exactly how you're gonna spit it :thumbup:

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This was pretty good, I don't dig the monotone delivery but do what you like. But I also don't punch in when i'm recording, if I fuck up, i start all over again and I don't have the problem of falling off beat (because if I do, I re-record until i get it just right) so take pride in your tracks and do it till you think its perfect, it'll make you feel a lot better.

Listening..

Beat is alright.. Quality is decent at best..

Breath control is good at some parts, wack at others..
Flow falls off a little..

Put some emotion into ur voice..
That monotone shit is annoying as hell..

Whatever though..

Decent for a first spit..