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Old 12-17-04, 04:44 PM   #1
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weerd... I mixed it for him and put it up on mine, cuz he got no SC.

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Old 12-17-04, 06:05 PM   #2
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damn i mixed it for him too. must of not liked my mixing

oh yeah nvm. it didnt send properly. oh well

this tracks koo

just lacks flow
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Old 12-17-04, 06:16 PM   #3
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damn i mixed it for him too. must of not liked my mixing

oh yeah nvm. it didnt send properly. oh well

this tracks koo

just lacks flow

^^LMFAO AT THIS HATER ANYWAYS SHIT HAD DOPE FLOW HE SOUNDS LIKE MASE WHICH ISNT GOOD YOU SHOULD SOUND LIKE YOURSELF BUT ANYWAYS LYRICS OK COULD BE WAY BETTER FLOW IS DOPE GOOD VOICE TOO
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Old 12-17-04, 10:20 PM   #4
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Stop being so shy on the mic. Spit like you got a pair....lol. Anyway, this wasn't bad at all for a first spit....might be because you had a little help editing, but either way, shit was alright. You fall off the beat a little but it takes time getting your flow down perfectly......I suggest you spit the verse about 5-10 times all the way through before you even record. This helps you get comfortable with the verse, so when you read it, you know exactly how you're gonna spit it

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Old 12-17-04, 10:43 PM   #5
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i do have a pair, lol, i like trying to use a monotone, i feel where ya'll is coming from, i don't like to punch in when i'm recording so i do it all without trying to stop, that's why i fell off beat some but shoutout to spul for mixing this shit, yea kon the file didn't transfer not that i know of and i do not sound like mase...empire, lol but thanks for peeping this shit ya'll, uppin for more feedback
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This was pretty good, I don't dig the monotone delivery but do what you like. But I also don't punch in when i'm recording, if I fuck up, i start all over again and I don't have the problem of falling off beat (because if I do, I re-record until i get it just right) so take pride in your tracks and do it till you think its perfect, it'll make you feel a lot better.
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Old 12-18-04, 06:41 PM   #7
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Listening..

Beat is alright.. Quality is decent at best..

Breath control is good at some parts, wack at others..
Flow falls off a little..

Put some emotion into ur voice..
That monotone shit is annoying as hell..

Whatever though..

Decent for a first spit..
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