just rhymin , quick spit
 

a yo niggaz get shit twisted like bloods crip walking/
and stumble over sentences like alcoholics talking/
i'll pump steel in ya/lodge slugs in ya skull cylinda (cylinder)/
spillin ya brains in somebodys hands and they still aint feelin ya/
i'll spray up ya block with no plannin/
cockin the cannon/
bring the heat to ya body and i aint talking about sun tannin/
ill show up and ruin ya family reunion/
take advantage of ya drunk sista b4 she know what she doin/
put a pillow over her face so she dont know who she screwin/
i'm hard to catch like the aids virus transformin in a cell/
i got pictures of me and ya moms downloaded on aol/
i'll roll up with spanish chix in my jag/
i receive more brains then scientists in a lab/
and i always tell bitches "no hickies please"/
and when bitches leave my house i love to see them smile like micky dees/
and i got niggaz bumpin and rewindin my shit/
and i cock macks and have niggaz grindin like clipse/

pretty good it stayed on topic and had a good flow stay up doing this shit

iight

good looks

it rhymed aiight.. but lacked a lot of shit which makes a drop good!!

one

good spi.. it had some nice punches

umm... rhyme about something different dawg, up your vocab... a lot, it might help you get more flow... your rhymes were pretty simple, quick or not, quit using and so much, its just a helper, peace 'n' keep spitting


signed,
~madd