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Old 07-12-02, 04:17 AM   #1
FaTaLiTy
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just rhymin , quick spit

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a yo niggaz get shit twisted like bloods crip walking/
and stumble over sentences like alcoholics talking/
i'll pump steel in ya/lodge slugs in ya skull cylinda (cylinder)/
spillin ya brains in somebodys hands and they still aint feelin ya/
i'll spray up ya block with no plannin/
cockin the cannon/
bring the heat to ya body and i aint talking about sun tannin/
ill show up and ruin ya family reunion/
take advantage of ya drunk sista b4 she know what she doin/
put a pillow over her face so she dont know who she screwin/
i'm hard to catch like the aids virus transformin in a cell/
i got pictures of me and ya moms downloaded on aol/
i'll roll up with spanish chix in my jag/
i receive more brains then scientists in a lab/
and i always tell bitches "no hickies please"/
and when bitches leave my house i love to see them smile like micky dees/
and i got niggaz bumpin and rewindin my shit/
and i cock macks and have niggaz grindin like clipse/
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Old 07-12-02, 06:26 AM   #2
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pretty good it stayed on topic and had a good flow stay up doing this shit
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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Old 07-12-02, 01:02 PM   #3
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iight
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Old 07-12-02, 04:26 PM   #4
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good looks
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Old 07-12-02, 04:40 PM   #5
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it rhymed aiight.. but lacked a lot of shit which makes a drop good!!

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Old 07-13-02, 08:23 AM   #6
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good spi.. it had some nice punches
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Old 07-13-02, 08:29 AM   #7
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umm... rhyme about something different dawg, up your vocab... a lot, it might help you get more flow... your rhymes were pretty simple, quick or not, quit using and so much, its just a helper, peace 'n' keep spitting


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