when iam gone
 

When I am gone will you miss me,
or will you twist my memories with disbelief,
when i AM gone will you cry for me?
or will you lie about my life to those who will listen,
when I am gone will you still miss me,
Or will you find another fishing buddy for you're weed?
When I am gone will you still love me???

Short and deep, the repatition was used well... Pretty good.

Return the favor? Appreciated.
Final Kiss

thnx I do what I can lol thnx for the feedback.

wow, this is pretty short, but seriously one of the best i've read from you lol.. good job man..

9/10

return the favor plz

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hey i made a song called "when i'm gone you'll miss me" that was fire
now ain't that funny

yea I did not know that I just sat here and typed away cuz in the fut I might be going into the arm services. peace