Lil D vs Royal_T
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-27-04 at 04:27 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Royal_T has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-04 04:28 PM.

Lil D has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-04 07:09 PM.

You cant trick me this aint april foolz/im only 14 and im already taken u to skool/im 14 and u 18/and this youngsta no who ya dating/I met her in da back of da alley/tryin to get some money so she can go back to cali/see dawg da difference between me and u is dat I treat a girl like lady not an object/oh im sorri dat shitz way off dat subject/see I got a beef dat wont stop/and one of em fo all dem bitch azz copz/for all my niggaz in da pin here we go again/aint nuttin stopping me from killin dat nigga mack 10/undastand im getting olda/so I wont pass ya by actin like I don’t know ya/us eclipse thugz we neva die/we retaliate wit hate den we multiply/this is sumin u gotta realize/ punk rappaz like ya self are all dressed in descuise/im in a high speed chase from da law/im da realest mothafucka dat chu eva saw/nigga u betta be listen/cuz im smackin babies at their crisenin/lil D da millionaire of da mansion da yot all I like to do is F-U-C-K/im da one whot shot ya popz / I shot em dead in da head/and left blood on his lam spread/no matter wat chu do u cant touch my riches even if u had MC Hammer and those 3-57 bitches/I was responsible for wat just accured/don’t worry about it just no I ment every fuckin word dat chu heard/dawg u softa den a male who dose hair/and why am I talking about this I don’t even care/yo if I was a geny Id grant u 3 wishes/and one would be to make yo dick longer than 3 inches/did he beat me? I doubt/im sick of diss peace out

Listen Yung Buck u juz a Ju-V, Cant even get in to see a rated R movie/Your lyrics let me know u qualify to be one of Jerry's kidz, imma undertaker for yunginz, I bury kids/Im feeling like ya daddy cuz Im rckin ya cradle, Lil ass still need a booster chair to sit at the table/I know u aint gettin no pussy cuz yo ass still aint went thru puberty, oh yeah and the other reason is becuz u got a "little D"/By the look of your lyrics, ya mom need to buy u hooked on phonix,But her fat ass to lazy she prolly hooked on SONICS/This battle is ova Im done teachin, So lil -d u can get back to beatin yo meat n- skeetin ya sheets n- fantasizing about lil boop n- when you done tell ya momma to bring me my sneaks n- stop yo wack ass from wheepin

Voted For: Royal_T

V/Royal_T......this was an ight battle but royal gets my vote cause they both had the same exact structure but he had punchs an good personals mixed wit them......lil d u had an ight verse but to bunched up an ur punchs werent really there work on that......No Hate....RETURN THE FAVOR.....
Opener=R
closer=R
structure=Tie
Punchs=R
personals=R
vocab=R
Multis=tie
Overall=Royal_T

Voted For: Royal_T

voe..............royal j

the other dude just isnt lyrically prepared , was more of a keystyle then a battle

lyrics............royal
wordplay.........neither
punches..................royal
structure...............royal
intensity.........neither
personals.........both

Voted For: Lil D

LIl D done tore the set up i favored this one more

Voted For: Royal_T

....took this battle.....

This was feedback posted for Royal_T
 

both verses was alright. didnt like the structures though.

Voted For: Royal_T

Yo Da Structure Wuz Way Off Frum Both Yall
Herez A Tip 4 Yall=

Make
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Line
Like
I
Am
Typing
Now
Ya Feel Me?

Royal T'z Lyrikal Content Wuz Much More Enjoyable & He Actually Dissed On Hiz Oppenent

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This was feedback posted for Royal_T
 

bad structure in both verses...im not votin and i doubt u got alot of vote on this...just to let yall know....fix ya structure and dont do more than 16 lines on a text battle.

Voted For: Royal_T

dis one goes to you, here's why

R.T.- wasnt feelin your opener but ya flow was pretty consistant...nice punches ad ya closer was kinda tight, feelin ya creativity...you lost me at phonix and sonics line, but i think u were most likely talkin about tha resturant but its ok

Lil D- u got room to elevate, ya punches werent really hitten but your attempts were ok, but you lost your consistancy..dis is a battle not a song, i dont see where yo beef wit tha cops got anythin to do wit R.T. but ok.

overall- R.T. flow and consistancy got him my vote, he also showed better punches and some creativity
Lil D, elevate lil homie, you got your structure straight, juss use better punches and hit em wit better personals