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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-27-04 at 04:27 PM

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Royal_T has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-04 04:28 PM.

Lil D has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-04 07:09 PM.

You cant trick me this aint april foolz/im only 14 and im already taken u to skool/im 14 and u 18/and this youngsta no who ya dating/I met her in da back of da alley/tryin to get some money so she can go back to cali/see dawg da difference between me and u is dat I treat a girl like lady not an object/oh im sorri dat shitz way off dat subject/see I got a beef dat wont stop/and one of em fo all dem bitch azz copz/for all my niggaz in da pin here we go again/aint nuttin stopping me from killin dat nigga mack 10/undastand im getting olda/so I wont pass ya by actin like I don’t know ya/us eclipse thugz we neva die/we retaliate wit hate den we multiply/this is sumin u gotta realize/ punk rappaz like ya self are all dressed in descuise/im in a high speed chase from da law/im da realest mothafucka dat chu eva saw/nigga u betta be listen/cuz im smackin babies at their crisenin/lil D da millionaire of da mansion da yot all I like to do is F-U-C-K/im da one whot shot ya popz / I shot em dead in da head/and left blood on his lam spread/no matter wat chu do u cant touch my riches even if u had MC Hammer and those 3-57 bitches/I was responsible for wat just accured/don’t worry about it just no I ment every fuckin word dat chu heard/dawg u softa den a male who dose hair/and why am I talking about this I don’t even care/yo if I was a geny Id grant u 3 wishes/and one would be to make yo dick longer than 3 inches/did he beat me? I doubt/im sick of diss peace out

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Respect de royal when u hear it

Listen Yung Buck u juz a Ju-V, Cant even get in to see a rated R movie/Your lyrics let me know u qualify to be one of Jerry's kidz, imma undertaker for yunginz, I bury kids/Im feeling like ya daddy cuz Im rckin ya cradle, Lil ass still need a booster chair to sit at the table/I know u aint gettin no pussy cuz yo ass still aint went thru puberty, oh yeah and the other reason is becuz u got a "little D"/By the look of your lyrics, ya mom need to buy u hooked on phonix,But her fat ass to lazy she prolly hooked on SONICS/This battle is ova Im done teachin, So lil -d u can get back to beatin yo meat n- skeetin ya sheets n- fantasizing about lil boop n- when you done tell ya momma to bring me my sneaks n- stop yo wack ass from wheepin

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This young nigga is vicious, Im a bucaneer in the court room, call me JUROR-VICIOUS

1 GOD 1 LOVE

Voted For: Royal_T

V/Royal_T......this was an ight battle but royal gets my vote cause they both had the same exact structure but he had punchs an good personals mixed wit them......lil d u had an ight verse but to bunched up an ur punchs werent really there work on that......No Hate....RETURN THE FAVOR.....
Opener=R
closer=R
structure=Tie
Punchs=R
personals=R
vocab=R
Multis=tie
Overall=Royal_T

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Voted For: Royal_T

voe..............royal j

the other dude just isnt lyrically prepared , was more of a keystyle then a battle

lyrics............royal
wordplay.........neither
punches..................royal
structure...............royal
intensity.........neither
personals.........both

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Voted For: Lil D

LIl D done tore the set up i favored this one more

Voted For: Royal_T

....took this battle.....

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..The Council..
7 Day Theory

both verses was alright. didnt like the structures though.

Voted For: Royal_T

Yo Da Structure Wuz Way Off Frum Both Yall
Herez A Tip 4 Yall=

Make
Each
Line
Like
I
Am
Typing
Now
Ya Feel Me?

Royal T'z Lyrikal Content Wuz Much More Enjoyable & He Actually Dissed On Hiz Oppenent

Return Da Vote In Da Link Below Or My Vote Will Be Removed
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bad structure in both verses...im not votin and i doubt u got alot of vote on this...just to let yall know....fix ya structure and dont do more than 16 lines on a text battle.