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STRAIGHT GANGSTA SHIT, werd
i wrote this verse last night while lissenin 2 Games Straight Outta Compton, werd
1st i'll write sum shit and then I'LL PRODUCE i make these beats fo tha kids like CHILD ABUSE hide all of ya shit, tha juviNILE IZ LOOSE i'll push u outta helicopter WILE A NUCE iz tied around yo neck cuz im a CRIMINAL sexy az fuck so i alwayz make tha WOMEN DROOL grade A graduate frum a PIMPIN SKOOL grab ya hair, hold ya hed down in a SWIMMIN POOL sayin ya did acid but THERE WUZ CITRIS stupid muthaphuka, yo WERE'S MY HITLIST write ya name down and that'll SCARE YA SHITLESS cuz wen i tie yo ass up in a CHAIR U'LL GIT THIS 2 bullets in tha hed and a PAIR OF SLIT WRISTS and if anybodys watchin i wont SPARE A WITNESS 25 bullets in tha chest bitch MARRY CHRISTMAS yeah thats just how im takin CARE OF BIZZNESS leave sum feedback essays, werd |
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=134765
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=163970 my 2 links 2 were i put feedback, werd |
WTF, 12 views and no feedback? LEAVE FEEDBACK U STUPID MUTHAPHUKKAZ, lol, werd
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get off eazy's dick,lol, fo real though ma dad new easy and wen i showed ma Dad ya post and shit, he threw a rock at da screen, no lie,lol
but dis was iight, for dat beat it was nice, pretty godd mayn |
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y did he do that? cuz of my sig? i aint ridin eazy's dick, its just that he's my idole an my favorite rapper n all that. were i live EVERYBODY lissens 2 N.W.A and Eazy-E, even tha punk rock kids do. thanx fo tha feedbak neway homie, werd |
that was pretty good
at 1s with the strucutre I was thinking it was gonna be wack but it had good wordplay and metas..flow was cool too.. dre was better *cough* |
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hahaha, thanx fo tha feedback homie, lol, werd |
cough* Cube wrote Eazys Lyrics*cough
lol fo reals but im from down here so u probly wish u could swtich places wit me huh,lol |
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lol, only on a couple of songz tho. and it wood b kool 2 go down there and just c how its different n shit. i mean, we do gotta lot of crime were i live, but it prolly aint shit compared 2 were u live, lol. werd |
nice job, homie...good multies and metaphors...peAce
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uppin fo feedback, werd
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how tha fuck yall gon sleep on this??? uppin, werd
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im feelin the multies...... and to this beat its laid back west coast style fits..... some of those metas was hella tight but its short and the lines are in a shorter version more for audio than for the text.... but the multies really help the flow.... but i suggest u switch ur structure up a lil without the CAPS
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you must have a coll dad that knows hip hop...dope my dad dosent know easy e but shit lay off eazy hes so dope but still hes dope..lol and for feed...ok first of all dont think your gangsta for this cuz its alright nothing super dope...its alright decent stucture and ncier flow with some good vocab some alright creativity,,but nothing super tigt.. |
i said ma Dad was and STILL IS in da streets daily so im thrust into it to, he listens to rap most of da time besides we plays blues and jazz which is koo by me
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