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Prong 15
(my b-day is april 16th)
life is cherishable,so to all you fools then - get wealth in retribution- cause to kill me is to only make me stronger - Death is evolution- well producing this is only a prong up on this long ladder of mine- cant see the top, or the last prong - but its only a matter of time- that i gather the mind to explore the unseen - more than just feet- but miles up i look forward to see my life in its stride, or in a leap- a leap to heavan or hell - if such places even exist in this life- i presistantly stride for Prong 16 while resisting the strife- i cant choose to be what i truely feel but still i learn on this- because the fork in the road is a mere straightaway with sharp turns on it- i try and gather up all my strength to reach this prong ahead of me but it seems my body's not letting me - and my arms are getting wea-k - These are my thoughts on Prong 15-it seems this prong is long,but long for what?- i cant step down cause ill regres and i step up cause im not strong enough- so not by choice - i stay still until i can move on with dreams- and thats April 16th - on that day i can reach the even longer - Prong 16- |
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dat was pretty good man, story was brough about, juss work on flow
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this was pretty good man...flow was a bit off but you had some good lines in there...overall this was a good peice...nice shit...8.5/10
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MADD I’m in a min-skirt do plenty dirt with a tinny flirt
My alphabet soup is a wet scoop of coochee stays alert Thugs and studs try hug me, buys bubbly talk lovy dovy and insert Cock in my box that’s the trick of a dick got to be quick Not afraid to parade in suede or get laid a wet and brave chick The DJ sound represent my rent I spent it on perfume for my room Panty removal make men proud get an approval from a crowd I assume Fact divine not an act of crime look boo I’ll take a wine glass Damn girl fine ass and sexy lips thanks messed up his mind fast “Thighs sweaty” he think my pies a wetty “hair long” this affair can be long “love your lips” this thug a trip “you got club hips” he wanna rub and grip “what you do at home?” he wanna screw and bone, oh wear a gown and read script “girl you a hot cutie” he think I you pot booty beat you can draw and sing you got a raw thing boo true? Well decide after the ride “aw girl I wanna cling to your juicy thing I bet the wet hairs around you brown thing so slick” I’m gonna lick it so hard and deep you’re gonna scream sweet and quick” “Damn girl I bet you got butter candies what color your panties?” You don’t know do you boo? “true” “ your coochee is like a toy wind look make me your boyfriend The DJ was pinning from beginning to the ending the flames of MURPHY LEE and JERMAINE DUPRI my body hot and shook coochee cook so I ask the DJ what the hook gonna be girl I don’t think MURPHY LEE need a hook on this Oh RHYME his cock jumped I see a hot lump in his pants as we romance |
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mad rappa y in god's name are u rapping in here? lol
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he did that in another Open Mic - homie's trippin hard
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lmao! yea he is....that was funny....well this had a really nice flow to it but i didn't get the whole - thing....i dunno maybe it's me.....but i like this a lot.....but you feel off at points in the middle but you picked it up again.....good shit man.....good shit....keep spittin your "Flamin Barz"
lol peace i'll get the link for mine in a sec 8/10 |
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