Ayo...

Since these lames took over the game I'm about to do me/
And put more composition under my belt than the world’s best word thief//

I stirred beef so I’ve seen the nervousness look at your posture/
Plus niccas put more emphasis on ice than a restaurant selling lobster//

Compared to the roster my stats are extensively transcendent/
I’m one of those people who captures the essence of life only to re-build it//

Yeah I do it but pushing rocks was never something I envisioned/
I was more of the headless chicken lost between a thought and an invention//

This shits to convincing I’m highly explicit and surpassingly gifted/
With the script that’ll dissect an infant’s core, and leave their brain shifted//

The pain lifted off of me regained strength in another NY fitted/
Cause as the law states energy is neither lost or destroyed its merely transmitted//

Damn with that line I’ve just outwitted the badly outfitted out-fielder/
He moved in thinking this top spitter wasn’t gonna swing with the best filter//

Baguettes circle ya neck forming a pendent made by the best jeweler/
I just fooled you with that line you thinking about diamonds I’m talking about techs loser//

I got a theory that the best emcees would boldly accept any challenge/
Yet I see niccas calling thyself God but can’t set fourth a steady balance//

They slowly panic and become asthmatic, Breathe bitch Breathe/
You know why Fabolous made that song cause he knows with that he controls the lead//



*A filter is when your battling and you just make yourself look good but you don't deliver any punches to your opponent
*Everything else is really explanatory but if you don’t get something ask me and I’ll explain it

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uppin 4 some replies..........come on guys dont sleep

For a keystyle, this was really good in fact...Your vocab, flow n structure were tight. I enjoyed reading your verse, just straight spitting which i absolutely love! My favo line was this one:

I’m one of those people who captures the essence of life only to re-build it
^maybe because i feel like i can relate to it, dunno but i definately liked this one!

Solid drop, keep on doing your thin gurl, keep it down for the ladies!

DQ

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no doubt thanx 4 da feed..........uppin dis shit..

this was a solid drop - you had a nice flow and some pretty dope lines - you were a little creative for this to be a keystyle - overall pretty solid drop - 6.5/10

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yo dis shit was fiya...and you from where?...THA D!...dats its right there 4real...yo i gives it a 8/10...keep goin...and try to check my shit out soon...~1~

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