Dio Deus vs TecKnic
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Biting
no hate votes
no dickriding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-27-05 at 11:23 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Dio Deus has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 11:23 AM.

TecKnic has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-25-05 12:57 AM.

I've already set the battle up, but you just wouldn't accept it
I understand you were scared, cause my words are like black magic
but at least drop some of your "lines" some of those whack rhymes
you won't even see the difference between a meta and punchline
And don't be so proud of yourself cause you don't have rythm
90% of your lyics are bitten, and the other 10% is just prewritten
And I can see a few people thinking well you do too
I wasted a few of this lines on cannabarz he didn’t want to loose
so for me this is easy, for you it gon' be a harder fight
but after this battle you're seriously dis(sed)qualified

Nigga I'll straight up cut ya throat
They'll put my whole verse in quotes
I already know ii'm gettin all 5 votes
So sit back adn start takin notes
See i aitn even trying hard for this battle
I'll raise you up and kill you liike cattle
cuz your like steroids hemroids
i mean you dont even know metaphysics
Ask the critics
They say i'm overrated...or outtdated
But like Em and 50 i' been paitenly waiting
see fuck you and fuck ya dawg too
I"ll bust a cap and kill you 2....niga

Voted For: TecKnic

FUCK YOU.
This is Teknics alias.
And Im voting for myself.
Because i want to win.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

uppin' for votes, which aren't voted by YOU! TECKNIK! (biatch)

uppin' for votes

Voted For: Dio Deus

Dio Deus

I've already set the battle up, but you just wouldn't accept it
I understand you were scared, cause my words are like black magic
^decent opener

but at least drop some of your "lines" some of those whack rhymes
you won't even see the difference between a meta and punchline
^hehe,good one

And don't be so proud of yourself cause you don't have rythm
90% of your lyics are bitten, and the other 10% is just prewritten
^like it a lot

And I can see a few people thinking well you do too
I wasted a few of this lines on cannabarz he didn’t want to loose
^doesn't do the trick...

so for me this is easy, for you it gon' be a harder fight
but after this battle you're seriously dis(sed)qualified
^okay closer

Overall good drop,had some nice punches in there,quite hardhitting in fact and not too played.Was definately feeling your flow,structure was good and vocab was okay.Tried some multi's here and there,only thing lacking is a very bold personal but it's all good...


TecKnic

Nigga I'll straight up cut ya throat
They'll put my whole verse in quotes
I already know i'm gettin all 5 votes
So sit back adn start takin notes
^decent opener

See i aitn even trying hard for this battle
I'll raise you up and kill you liike cattle
^not feelin it

cuz your like steroids hemroids
i mean you dont even know metaphysics
Ask the critics
^sorta weak...

They say i'm overrated...or outtdated
But like Em and 50 i' been paitenly waiting
^nah man...

see fuck you and fuck ya dawg too
I"ll bust a cap and kill you 2....niga
^don't like your closer

This wasn't that good to be honest with you, tried some punches but they didn't always land that hard.No personals,not always feeling your flow.Vocab was okay,structure could be lil bit better.Just try to get some more hardhitting and effective punches and personals and it'll all be good...no hate...

okay, uppin' for more votes

uppin' for votes

Voted For: Dio Deus

i gotta give this too dio deus but that's not much of a compliment cause this wasn't much of a battle. the punches were weak some of it didn't rhyme but tecknic's verse was the worst because his attempts at punches were all failed. his metaphors were bad dio deus won simply because he had a punch that landed. not hard but it landed.

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uppin' for votes

Voted For: Dio Deus

BOTH IN NOK SO CANT VOTE. ........................

SHIT
I MEANT TO HIT FEEDBACK BUT DID VOTE BY MISTAKE,
SOME 1 DQ IT PLZ.