Gansta Shit
 

Young Mix is back mothafuckas(12x)

Im one of da elite,yall niggaz just decievin ta rap
and think dat you can buck wit da Mix,you'll be recievin a slap
I got dese rap niggaz on they knees wit a dat
Im da illest in dis fuckin rapgame, just leave it at dat
Im gettin krunk wit some trees in da back
and dese lyrics'll delete yo ass til all dats left of ya is a sleeve and a hat
And I leave dese niggas petrified
man I squeeze guns fa exercise,yall lil niggas betta recognize
And fuck wit my clique,Ill explode bombs all around ya ways
cause dat 4 pound'll straight leave you on da ground fa days
Yo,dese niggas is wrong fa thinkin they label rocks
cause dem niggas be rockin more wires than a cable box
So nigga,ya neva had a chance but my record made it
and fuck wit da champ,Ill have yo head and body separated
And dese niggas holdin they breath,yall need ta inhale truly
cause in dis rapgame,Ima Man On Fire like dat Denzel movie

(Hook)
Look,nigga,dis is gansta shit
I gotta ak50 ta thank ya wit
Dese cats dat rap be spittin wanksta shit
yall niggas need ta get outta here cause dis aint ya shit(wwwhhhhooooaaaa)

Yall cant fuck wit me,get ya mothafuckin headright


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open mic rules:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141490
leave ya link:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165166

u have 24 hours to post a link with proper feed back if u dont understand what is a proper feed back click on these links above they should help those who really dont understand and for those who is playin dumb u'r one step to being BANND from open mic...

yo Mix u r hot come to A.T.R. and try out for the crew

Ayo thanx and Ill get back at ya wit dat
More feedback on dis please

Young Mix

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um you need better vocab an complexity.......it was basic......

that shit sucked fuckin' ballsack, and you didn't even spell gansta right. So generic and just fuckin' retarded. Everyone who has read it now is that much shittier of an m.c. just for having been exposed to it.

-CJ-

Hope this was a joke, cause that shit is funny man.

-CJ-

Nigga,dis was some ill shit,betta than anything you can come up wit
Speakin of come up wit,where yo song at
You'se a fuckin hater,I can tell yo shit is wack from yo name bitch
so you can suck my dick you garbage ass hater
You wouldnt be sayin all dat hard shit if you seen me,so you gotta talk hard on da fuckin Internet,nigga ,fuck you wack ass bitch
Dats real shit

I just left honest feedback. Besides i could just drop a terd on my keyboard and just hit enter after whatever jibberish came up and it would still be better than your shit.

-CJ-

You know what,its ok.I feel sorry for you.You 21 still rappin on a website plus you ridin one of da most wackest rappers Talib Kweli's dick.So drop sumthin
since you said it,back it up,cause I just wrote shit dat rhymed,so you do sumthin.Lets see how wack yo trick ass is.

that was incredibly simple....need 2 up that shit man

links??

first of all,this is tooo simple. Your topic is played b/s. your onm about the same shit the next man is.This would of gone better in self glorification cypher.4 real.

You have alot of room to elevate.'

man I squeeze guns fa exercise,yall lil niggas betta recognize
this line is stupid, you havent showen any lyrical skill, or any imagination.

anyone can write. im a shoot you i got gun play for miles im this im that your wak im good.
but it doesnt actually prove shit


feel me?
i am in noway hating on you. but if the truth hurts than so be it.

oh yeh return the feed.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174342

Man, I dont give a fuck what anybody say,dis shit is sick
and if you dont think so,you just a wack emcee on dis site
So if ya call me garbage,I really dont give a fuck cause chances are you worse than me.But I respect everybody dat bring dis feedback ta me real.
Big ups

if you cant handle real crit,then why post your shit.
if your allready better than us, leave. go to dr dre or kanye west and tell them how good you are.

If you want to elevate then come to new breed and we will help you, but you have gotta understand we will speak the truth.
Why would I lie and say your shit is played? what would i get out of that, I said it so you relised"hey maybe i should try some original topic's", blah.
if you cant hack constructive critism then dont drop. if you can then come to new breed, and we will help you elevate.