SouljaBoi vs J.R. Freeze
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 16 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-29-05 at 03:07 PM

Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in.

SouljaBoi has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-05 02:38 PM.

J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-05 02:43 PM.

yo i knew you was comin',i felt how da climate shifted/
but imma soulja,im made to survived these conditions/
i head straight to da eye of da storm/
and pierce through it wit da heat i pack in my right arm/
yes i know dat you are scared solid(frozen)/
and i snuck up on yo azz as if i were metal gear solid/
its ok to be cold inside,Jr freeze/
you small like wendy's jr freeze,Mr.freeze please/

(Startinnn off hooottt......)
My Raps-Serve Cats..Leavin Spirits Rome-in like THE LAST-WORD..Call Me ACCUPUNCTURE Cuz my tracks Are Sure To STAB-NERVES/
FreeZe slaps kids and attacks with tragic wratchets that'll blast~quick at~this wack~BITCH!/
Im known for puttin' bitches like you in caskets, and you comin' to *school with a disease* will be the only way you become *CLASS~SICK[Classic]//
My knives~and~swords slice this spineless~whore, puttin' him on life~support prayin' to Christ~the-Lord!/
This bitch began living as a *pussy* and that'll remain through out his whole life like when *DYKES~ARE~BORN!*//
My text'll leave Souljaboi with tore~raps, a sore~back and damaged THORAX!/
Fuck endin' this bitch's life here, I'd rather end his life where it began, so I'll slaughter this bitch where he was BORN~AT!/
This bitch think he's *hot* but I'll make the *weather change* when I put all of her limbs in *FOUR~CASTS[Forecast]*//

~~FIrE~~~
This Fag's-Lame, wouldn't be a "blessed head" if you had a NUN'S-BRAIN//
"Strokin ya meat in jets" cuz all this faggot does is CUM-PLANE//(complain)
Deplete-You-Wit-Fists til veigns leak and blood Seeps-Through-Ya-Wrists//
Like "aborted babies"...illness in ya verses CEASE-TO-EXIST//
How the fuck did you get to?Be 1-0....that shit's Still-a-Mystery//
FreeZe's the "Grinch" of RV cuz I'm quick to "STEAL"-a-Victory//

-MurDa-
FReeZe's rhymes "bring tha pain" but don't get it Mistooken-wit-METH//
Like playin "hide 'n go seek with the Grim Reaper," you're "LOOKIN-for-DEATH"//.......

good drop homie fareal................
...................................uppppin for votes

Voted For: J.R. Freeze

diz was an one-sided battle but here's my view of it:
opener: jr
punches: both
personals: jr
multis: freeze
vocab: freeze
closer: freeze
jr just came harder & took it, soulja u just didn't come as hard as i've seen u do b4 elevate ur rhymes more & u'll win da next time

Voted For: J.R. Freeze

One-sided battle u took dis hands down
u had da punches
da metaphor da whole nine yards...
v/J.R. Freeze

Voted For: J.R. Freeze

Voted for J.R. Freeze

freeze got dis due to consinstincy

Punches on both were good but freeze came with alot more and it stacked the favors on his side

flow both were good but Soul got it, Freeze was a lil hard at some points

Word Play is a main one that I gave to freeze
Soul ya word play was a lil original but good still

Soul good verse overall but needed to be longer n a lil harder frreze took it all the way u went with a short one mos the tyme thatll make you loose

Good Battle Fams

Not Hatin Jus Votin

This was feedback posted for J.R. Freeze
 

goddamn!!!! this was the biggest prewritten shit i've eva read... im not voting cuz i dont think this battle was fair. i'll give you some tips from a vet tho... dont make ur verse all fancy wit caps and shit... that makes me really not want to read it at all ya know... quotes are ok but all that other stuff is reeeeeeallly gay. to improve: dont make ur lines so looooong... they seem to drag on forever which really cuts ur flow back... work on ur punches some more because they seem really played and simple. aight ~1~

Voted For: J.R. Freeze

J took dis one imo....he had multies more consistent punches...had a nice opener and closer.....
souljaboi u would have took it if ur verse had more complexity....n ur rhymes were basic...

vote-jr
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze

lmao dis shit wasn't even close....

opener-jr
structure-a tie
punchline-jr
creativity-jr
wordplay-jr
multis-jr
personals-bi even tho they were weak
finisher-jr
enjoyed-jr...nuff said

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