phive vs SQUAD-UP
 

Battle Rules:

6 bars max
u know the rules
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Minimum posts to vote: 55

Check in by: 02-01-05 at 04:52 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-05 05:23 PM.

im cuttin ya up like a baby with a razorblade
squad up chuggin cock like its gatorade
cant beat phive, even if ya prayed

squad up, i say what the fuck
you cant beat phive dawg cuz ya made ta suck
squad up tryin harder to get up than a cripple gettin unstuck

SQUAD-UP has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 07:06 PM.

yo uppin when is this fool gonna post his fucking verses fuck man come on

SQUUUUUUAAAAAD UP!!!!!

yeah, this nigga actin hard, like he'll ryde or die
nah i aint juice, but im bout to eat "phive alive"
ima let u feel my flows, i'll scratch ya waist wit my pencil
i aint barbara walters, but you'll come face to face wit the special
i got twins pumps, to spin chumps, nigga the clip dumps
to give u swollen up cheeks like a rabid chipmunk
its a cot damn lie, if this man is a soldier
rapverse says u wack, we gon can him like folgers
u nasty hoe, u b in the bed sheets wit dead freaks for 10 weeks
u mess wit me , i'll turn ya white airs to red sneaks
hang up this rap gig, like u b in the cleaners
before u get mo stab wounds than Julius caesar....EASSSSY

*five alive is an old cheap orange juice knockoff drink

ight uppin for votes on this battle, holla at me wit honest votes n they'll b returned

Voted For: SQUAD-UP

squad-up gets my vote....he had nice punches and stayed wit it throughout his verse....phives punches were good but dey didnt hit hard enough to me....even tho dat gansta killa shit worked this time.(that thing about the twin pumps) in da future try not to use it because it dont really go right wit text-online battles....sayin dat my
v/Squad_up
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Voted For: SQUAD-UP

ok one theres a rule it has to be 10 lines are better anything under you lose but anyways phive wack no punches or good disses no personals i could see either vocab was 2nd grade level on your verse struture was off lines look like
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i see this alot wtf is that?
anyways squad up decent punches the 5 alive bar was decent you need to word ya shit better though punches are decent but could be real good with a lil better wording sun and dont talk about gun play youll lose points for that cuz you cant bust no gun on the net doggie otherwise decent verse vocab is pretty good but way better punches struture and shit got you this ez and got you my vote

ight thanks for the honest votes peeps,,, uppin for more.......1............

ight thanks for the honest votes peeps,,, uppin for more.......1............

Voted For: SQUAD-UP

phive
structure is pretty good.. flow is pretty good.. no multis.. no good wordplay.. at all.. none of your punches connected.. no good personals..

SQUAD-UP
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay is pretty dope.. a few of ur punches connected.. you attempted a few personals..

Overall
both had a good structure and flow.. neither had multis.. SQUAD-UP had better wordplay, more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.., SQUAD UP gets my vote..

VOTE - SQUAD-UP

Voted For: SQUAD-UP

YO I GIVE THIS TO SQUAD UP

OVERALL THE KIDD IS JUST BETTER
METAS-SQUAD
WORDPLAY-SQUAD
STRUCTURE-PHIVE
PUNCHES-SQUAD

ight thanks for the honest votes peeps,,, uppin for more.......1............

ight thanks for the honest votes peeps,,, uppin for more.......1............