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Young Phrophet 02-02-05 02:17 PM

Khaos_daRenegade vs Young Phrophet
 
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



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System 02-02-05 02:18 PM

Khaos_daRenegade has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 02:18 PM.

System 02-02-05 02:18 PM

Young Phrophet has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 02:18 PM.

Khaos_daRenegade 02-02-05 02:36 PM

by yo rhymes i can tell u da kiddie and lazy type...
cuz all yo lines be about as shitty as baby wipes...
like a candle in da wind u will die out quick....
lol, heres da proof dawg ya tryout spit...
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...=Young+phrophet
and yea dis false phrophet just preachin and fakin...
but the only truth to ya is the beatin u takin...
usually i kill fast but for u ima slowly slaughter...
and leave dis fake reverend drownin in holy water...


:thumbup: :laugh2:
im da shit :thefinger

Khaos_daRenegade 02-02-05 03:38 PM

damn dawg wat u doin searchin for rhymes on the net

Young Phrophet 02-09-05 12:46 PM

Ya rhymes suck and damn sure are shifty//
Now what the fuck Khaos you ain't got shit me to diss me//Thought you had me in sight, though I was marked to be dead//but in fact the target was aimed at the back of ya head//
Comin in swiftly, move like when vapor is misty//
you lookin back tryin to figure out why ya shadows' shifty//
Let me tell you nice... I'm not ya fuckin shadow, and you shoulda thought twice before accepting the fuckin battle//
Now, i got more ammo, that'll blend you into shit like you was mothafuckin camo//
I may choose the triggaz, but my triggaz neva choose//
Cuz who i choose to pop won't matter cuz the shooter isn't you//
I'll slash ya vest, rip it off, then i'll gash ya chest//
Pussy, have ya momma take you back to rest, just to prove you ain't got skill to question second guess//
Ain't my fault you gettin hung your the one who wove ya rope//
Before you took a shot at me, you shoulda checked to scope//

Young Phrophet 02-09-05 12:48 PM

and just to let you know

False Phrophet! Haha! I laugh~Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Khaos_daRenegade 02-09-05 03:03 PM

by yo rhymes i can tell u da kiddie and lazy type...
cuz all yo lines be about as shitty as baby wipes...
like a candle in da wind u will die out quick....
lol, heres da proof dawg ya tryout spit...
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...=Young+phrophet
and yea dis false phrophet just preachin and fakin...
but the only truth to ya is the beatin u takin...
usually i kill fast but for u ima slowly slaughter...
and leave dis fake reverend drownin in holy water...

intensify effect 02-09-05 03:50 PM

Voted For: Young Phrophet



Ya rhymes suck and damn sure are shifty//
Now what the fuck Khaos you ain't got shit me to diss me//
Thought you had me in sight, though I was marked to be dead//
but in fact the target was aimed at the back of ya head//
Comin in swiftly, move like when vapor is misty//
you lookin back tryin to figure out why ya shadows' shifty//
Let me tell you nice... I'm not ya fuckin shadow, and you shoulda thought twice before accepting the fuckin battle//
Now, i got more ammo, that'll blend you into shit like you was mothafuckin camo//
I may choose the triggaz, but my triggaz neva choose//
Cuz who i choose to pop won't matter cuz the shooter isn't you//
I'll slash ya vest, rip it off, then i'll gash ya chest//
Pussy, have ya momma take you back to rest, just to prove you ain't got skill to question second guess//
Ain't my fault you gettin hung your the one who wove ya rope//
Before you took a shot at me, you shoulda checked to scope//

^^^ i had to quote the whole thing CUZ i aint feelign like brakin it down bar by bar...

ya flow was on-point, but punches u lacked on , this looked more like a open mic verse but still not bad a couple of good lines in there and other wasnt, creativeness was aight but could of been better good try....


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by yo rhymes i can tell u da kiddie and lazy type...
cuz all yo lines be about as shitty as baby wipes...
preety good..

like a candle in da wind u will die out quick....
lol, heres da proof dawg ya tryout spit...
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...=Young+phrophet
ia int see the ink but if its true decent personal...

and yea dis false phrophet just preachin and fakin...
but the only truth to ya is the beatin u takin...
ok..

usually i kill fast but for u ima slowly slaughter...
and leave dis fake reverend drownin in holy water...
decent ending...

what can i say short and sweet.. a good punch in there, flow good, creativeness slightly better and a personal in there...

^^ so u get the win by a hair u just edge it out...

returnt he favor of a HONEST VOTE::
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174354
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174024

Vote switched

Khaos_daRenegade 02-09-05 04:03 PM

yoooooo that vote was for me not young right????????

intensify effect 02-09-05 04:21 PM

OOOOOOOOOO-SHIT my fult dogs.......

yea pm strobe and tell him to switch it word........

Armada Da 187 02-09-05 04:51 PM

Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade

Khaos got this by a thread

Punches were the factor in this one n khoas brought it better in my mind. Young Ya punches were good but not as to the point ya had sayings that directed sumwhere else khaos when i red his disses i new where aimed at u

flow was good on both
good structure
little personals but still godd for both

Khaos gets the vote due to Punches

Good Battle fams
Holla

godfather 02-11-05 09:17 AM

Voted For: Young Phrophet

i think young phrophet won because he had good vocab
really hard hittin punches good structure
good multis and a great opener
khaos u had good structure
u need a lil work on ur vocab
u had a pretty good opener
u had some good punches
overall both battles were alright

best young prophet lines:
Comin in swiftly, move like when vapor is misty//
you lookin back tryin to figure out why ya shadows' shifty//
Let me tell you nice... I'm not ya fuckin shadow, and you shoulda thought twice before accepting the fuckin battle//
Now, i got more ammo, that'll blend you into shit like you was mothafuckin camo//
I may choose the triggaz, but my triggaz neva choose//
Cuz who i choose to pop won't matter cuz the shooter isn't you//

best khaos lines:
and yea dis false phrophet just preachin and fakin...
but the only truth to ya is the beatin u takin...
usually i kill fast but for u ima slowly slaughter...
and leave dis fake reverend drownin in holy water...

Khaos_daRenegade 02-11-05 10:23 AM

uppin this shit ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ need more votes

Young Phrophet 02-15-05 12:25 PM

uppin............................................. .............................


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