TUNIT vs Lord.Wun
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 02-03-05 at 11:40 AM

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TuNiT has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-05 11:20 AM.

Lord.Wun has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-05 11:28 AM.

yo they saw am more deadly than a aligator clutchin a BAZOOKA
So if the jaba-jaws dont get ya you know ima SHOOT-YA
i'll DILUTE-YA PEOPLE cause i get straight to da point like a CHURCHES STEEPLE
Ya rhyme schemes FEBEL, an your born ta BORE
only time you'll ever light up the stage is bein a rodie on TOUR
ya bout as HARDCORE as the DISNEY CHANNEL
an even if you sent a BRIBE out i'd still get the votes from the PANEL !

upping this...........
.....................Ill vote on your shit...

Voted For: Lord.Wun

Not a very hot battle yall but i gotta give this one to Lord wun. His word plays were better then t unit's because t unit's didn't make sense. Jabber jaw was a shark. His punches were pretty weak too. But lord's wasn't much much better. just enough to pull off the vote. unit's multi was kinda lame too. No hate but that's just my opinion. but lord's gotta get off those gay jokes cause they're played. unless you can make an exceptional word play or something try to sway away from those. Both need to elevate no hate. But i always return the favor so yall should.

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word aiight thanx for the honest vote......uppin this

Voted For: Lord.Wun

diz was an one-sided battle da whole way:

opener: lord.wun
vocab: lord
punches: lord
personals: lord
structure: lord
closer: lord
da reason i chose lord 2 win my vote is b'cuz 1 he came alot harder; 2 he got str8 2 da point
tunit u didn't get my vote cuz 1 u stretched ur rhymes 2 much; & took a long time 2 get 2 da point

Voted For: Lord.Wun

Lord Wun

Let's Skip to Rap Basics..At a Skale Of 10..Tunit's Neva "met-a-four"..
Drop da Rap Act..His normal battles is shit like..Who da Betta whore..

Liked it. Very good opener. 10/10

Gatz hit Ya Chest, So that way you can really "Spit From The Heart"..
Any Kinda Verse he sends to Record Labels, They Jus' Rip Em Apart..

Guess I liked it. just work on your shit like that.8/10

But Let Me Speed things Up...But I mean That in No Homo Terms..
'Cause last time i said that,Kid Got Horny..Oh well, the homo learned..

Well nice bar and I liked the way it flowed. 10/10

But Fuck It Imma End it with a Bang..Like the ends of Porno flicks..
I can see why he gay, last gurl chopped em off, ..So now he walks with strap on Dicks..

There I finiished ur line. Ver dope closing 10/10

You need to improve and land ur punches better thats all.

Don't even need to vote for him. he needs work in all. Just work on it. You''ll do good....

word 3-0 me...uppin thiss shit ill return da fav....

im gutta like butta and im uppin this battle ma fucka

Voted For: Lord.Wun

Lord.Wun...

you had some tite ass shit... most def took this... you had better structure and better metaphors and better everything...

point blank TuNiT... you need to work on alot... your style reminds me of Shottaboi... and that's definately not good. Structure is important in text... work on it. And Also up your punches as well.

Voted For: Lord.Wun

winner- Lord Wun
very close battle, u two are very evenly matched in this battle

flow-tie
multi-Lord Wun
inner rhyming-Tunit
punches-Lord Wun


Let's Skip to Rap Basics..At a Skale Of 10..Tunit's Neva "met-a-four"..
Drop da Rap Act..His normal battles is shit like..Who da Betta whore..
Gatz hit Ya Chest, So that way you can really "Spit From The Heart"..
Any Kinda Verse he sends to Record Labels, They Jus' Rip Em Apart..

these 2 bars were hot. Punch was strong and so were the multis

But Let Me Speed things Up...But I mean That in No Homo Terms..
'Cause last time i said that,Kid Got Horny..Oh well, the homo learned..
But Fuck It Imma End it with a Bang..Like the ends of Porno flicks..
I can see why he gay, last gurl chopped em off,

..So now he walks with strap on Dicks..

heavy punches, nice finisher

Tunit

yo they saw am more deadly than a aligator clutchin a BAZOOKA
So if the jaba-jaws dont get ya you know ima SHOOT-YA
i'll DILUTE-YA PEOPLE cause i get straight to da point like a CHURCHES STEEPLE

punch was aight, u sorta praised urself a lil bit

Ya rhyme schemes FEBEL, an your born ta BORE
only time you'll ever light up the stage is bein a rodie on TOUR
ya bout as HARDCORE as the DISNEY CHANNEL
an even if you sent a BRIBE out i'd still get the votes from the PANEL !

nice inner rhyming, punch was good
finisher was hot