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Invektive vs meteor-k
Battle Rules:
6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 KO Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-03-05 at 07:06 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
MetEoR-K has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-05 06:49 PM.
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Invektive has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-05 06:50 PM.
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Your only strapped when tied to a bar burning in a pit of flame
You a nobody, I don't wanna hear you even spit my name No biting? Well dude looks like you broke your own rule My flow is smooth as a car, and you choke on the fuel You use your pimps rhymes, like monkey see monkey do They suck like a bitch, but are also a little funny too Sorry but I'm about to tack a 1 after your 4 dash Why you rap everything you rhyme is sure wack My flow is moving, it'll make you go to a lake Tie cement to your shoes, and you think you'd wake But I ain't a dream, I'm as real as can be dude I deflect your punch's with rhymes, now shoe! |
Damn, good luck dude, I ain't that confident at the verse I jus spit
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your talent level is as low as it gets, at the bottom,embedded in hell this fool is gonna lose to me.....he knows this..........he said it himself you only METEOKOR in fact.........ima be straight disbarring his frame it'd be directly on point......if you put a KO before the R in your name won his first battle so he hype....but dude was the worst on the site eminems from the same state as he is.....so he thinks that he's nice |
Uppin for some votes, yo yo yo, vote or die =p....
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uppin for the W.......................................
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Voted For: Invektive
V/Invektive....this was a onesided battle invektive had this one cause of his diss's an vocab wit good structure he was more creative wit the personals....meteor-k ur verse was to basic nuthin really creative wit the punchs or vocab...no hate elavate..... punchs=In vocab=in structure=in opener=IN closer=In overall=Invektive *RETURN THE FAVOR* |
Voted For: Invektive
Meteor k got treated on this one. Meteor k's punches were a little weak, and his rhymes were basic they were more like jokes rather then punchlines and no personals. no multis either. invektive had no multis but the play on his name was pretty good, but i don't know if the personal on him admitting defeat was true. nice play on his hometown too. plus he went over the line limit by 6. return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174830 me vs. mafia http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174024 me vs. intensify effect http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173417 me vs. os1ris http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171308 me vs. nightmare |
Voted For: MetEoR-K
checking polls.................................... Vote removed |
my bad i meant to hit feedback so jus get dat vote removed......
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Voted For: Invektive
Aiight look both came weak as hell.. METEO, you tried some multies so that was good but you didnt follow through with them enough, and you had absolutly no punches. Invektive, #1 dont ever rely on links to be your punchline, that was weak like whoa.. I think you definatly need to work on concepts and punchlines, but you got potential. The other dude needs to work on everything. But I think thats cause he probably just started writing rhymes.. So just keep at it man. PEACE. |
uppin this.............................................. ...
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Voted For: Invektive
easy win for Invektive killed this cat on the second line soon as he said that "he said it himself" it was over meteor you were garbage sorry dude but for reals MONKeys? no that wasnt funny or conecting |
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