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Inbetween the lines.
So this is a topical battle from the tourney... I went minimum lines, cause it was pretty difficult... But i was really impressed with myself... And keep in mind i have writin like 40 topicals.
Every part of me... Guts, stress, fear... Put down on paper, blood, sweat, tears... Torn apart... I'm gettin hounded again... Wont give up, just jot it down wit a pen... It's just how i get by, how I'm expressin my life... It helps to cut back, on this depression and strife... It's my motivation, to make these songs... Makes me a better person, and makes me strong... Get to know me better, its a way of finding me... Every part of me, its basically my diary... The only time that i can really express... How i feel, and people, will still be impressed... A line in my rap, is like a minute of my life... A punch in my battles, is like the blade of my knife... A story in an open mic, is something i went through... And most my topical battles, are something i did too... So when you read my shit, you can sense the heart in me... How i live my life, because i express every part of me... And when i mix it up, it's just me re-defined... When it comes to rap, i put myself inbetween the lines... |
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Upping... This is seriously dope shit, read it... I will return the favor.
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yeah it'z a nice drop i like ur content thru out the whole topical u got sum potential keep up the good work
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Upping.........
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Upping^^^^^^^^^
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yeh i like this piece anx, you kept it simple but yet complexed at the same time, i liked it cos it actually related to yourself which is always a plus point, clever concept also for the topic it was gud, abit short but all tourney topicals are, flow was gud, structure was gud and cud feel some gud emotion
ye i'd give this an 8.5/10 which is gud cos im a tough marker dope piece could ya plz return the fav and leave feed on my om 'sacrifice for success, would be appreciated |
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Upping^^^^^^^^^
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