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02-14-05, 03:23 PM
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Sacrifice For success
IP:
Piece From Topical League, Want Some Feedback, Thx
. . . . Feelings flooding intellect, brain suddenly in direct
.Thus collect the jigsaw pieces that my life dissect Wrecked but yet a hope prevails in a certain distance This one girls existence encourages a stern resistance For instance an addiction, true story turned fiction Anatomy plagued by drugs now involved in eviction Friction of relationship, thoughts position station wit Ovation sits as mind considers that her patience slips Educational opportunity, a chance that confuses me Key to a future, a commanding choice that abuses me Materialistic life with power to challenge the above Or struggle & strife, shared with a girl that you love Result to a dice, fate before my pride asks for advice Success comes at a price, importance of this sacrifice A painful decision, tears of joy? an emotional collision Vision an empty life of waste, heart caged in prison As I stand with mail, crooked shoulders tells a tale Mental exhaustion, looking frail, application to unveil Hearts ratio, pace greater, deposit letter in waste paper A sacrifice for success? yes, to see that face later . . .  drop a link with-in 24 hours or this will be closed... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165166 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170910
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