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am i worthy of a crew?
boy i'll shoot first..keepin you on ya p's and q's nigga blast through ya fake coogi like i was a q dawg nigga "cuban" niggaz get "boxed" out..i run up in ya house "geometry" style..my crew "triangle" ya spouse cuz we straight up run trains wit 3 niggaz and one dame doin tha same thang..gettin pussy and gettin brain they call me tha "BLACK" mayne..but im "afro-american" to u dudes different "bases" i steal..grabbin "bats" to smash ya crews im new to some jews, but horrifyin to catholics and im a baptis..only one "father" so its death to tha "bastards" i master tha style of wu-tang to punch u in ya grill and leave u to rot like "cavities"..too much "hawiian punch" in ya grill and life is real short..cuz death is certain to yall i mull innocent bystanders jus for standin by too long im so far ahead of my time, my own sould gotta "ketchup" and i'll slap tha taste out ya mouth for tryin to "mustard" up a "match up" so, do any crews fill dis? if not its iight. LEAVE FEEDBACK. i need tha critics help. :thumbup: drop a link with-in 24 hours or this will be closed... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165166 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170910 |
can i get some feedback plz
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You aight, decent wordplay for the most part, few nice metas too.............
Wanna collab? i'm mad bored, you choose thwe topic, i'll work on the hook an i'll post a verse to you thru pm, just get at me with a topic my nigga |
iight, cool wit me. let me think a bit
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shit was nice 4real...i was feelin tha metaz and yo structure was iight...its cool though kid...u a newb but u cool in my book...keep up tha good work...8.5/10...~1~
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good nice concept & i like it overall quality was official i would give it 8.5/10
also make sure 2 return the favor in my open mic |
thanx yall. mos def appreciated
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dis was koo
but its sum wak crews so...................... |
drop a link with-in 24 hours or this will be closed... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165166 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170910 |
^^^iight, dammit. im bout to
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uppin.....uppin.....uppin
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uppin.................................
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this was weak as fuck...how the hell you gonna diss nas...and his latest album..when you can;t even put together a decent punchline
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yo i agree a little with everybody except for dolla (no offense Dolla, it wasn't that good) u do need ta work on your punchlines and vocab, but i see u threw in some effort ta throw in some punches and that so i'll give a 5.5/10 elevate
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